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The Morning After


I woke up feeling complete
Curved along his sleek frame
It felt like a poetic painting
As I now shall share his name

I married the man of my dreams
My wide smile sings a happy soprano
I feel tickled by the strings of the guitar
Kissing the flute and dancing on a piano

Last night our souls entwined together
From this morning, love shall only grow
I look at his face and thank my stars
As the magical symphony caresses my toe

Written for The Magpie Tales: Mag 205.

~ Soumya

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  1. Beautiful... lovely... amazing... wow... romantic
    I have seriously lost all adjectives for you ;)

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  2. I could hear it as you played! The lines "I feel tickled by the strings of the guitar Kissing the flute and dancing on a piano are very romantic. Nice write.

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  3. Very clever. I like how you used a lot of music references.

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  4. Beautiful. The feeling of being in love and falling deeper into it!!

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  5. You do have magic in your words! Well written!

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    1. Thanks for coming back again! :)

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    2. I am catching up your old posts and honest phases are just tooooo Awesome! Loved your narration and am out of words to describe how you write!

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  7. The morning after is a good hangover so long as it is done in good measure.
    :)

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  8. Beautiful! Music really is everyone's first love>

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  9. Oh wow!
    Great symphony of words :)

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  10. "Last night our souls entwined together" <3

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  11. Can't tell you how much I loved this. Beautiful.

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