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They say the first cut
Shall always be the deepest
Oh yes, they were right
Oh yes, they were right
I can see the dark crimson
Flowing out of me
Flowing out of me
Love that I have felt for you
Erasing the pain
Erasing the pain
Taking away everything
I then close my eye
Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Cut.
Poignant.
ReplyDeleteIntended it that way.
DeletePainfully beautiful. I love your Haiku :)
ReplyDeletehow true, first cut is true so deep that it's roots run very deep.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautifully expressed words..:)
Thank you! Nice to see you back here after long :)
DeleteThey say it right. It is never the same love twice. And the pain forever persists.
ReplyDeleteLovely! And touching too...yes first cut is the deeeepest!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shaivi!
Deleteits hearbreaking ! the last line '' i close my eye '' is really gloomy ,Soumya !
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Milan!
Deletewhat they say is right .. but then it is also right that one door close the other opens ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
I agree!
DeleteBeautiful Haiku, but heart-breaking :/
ReplyDeleteTrue that...the first cut :) Haiku is not one of my strong points but you have done a wonderful part.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janu :)
DeleteAaahhh!! That first cut!!!! I know how difficult it is to make up a poem or a haiku; I could never do it.. I love you :)
ReplyDeletePoignant !!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Jyo! :)
DeleteI hope that is not the ebbing of life itself but the flushing out of a bad experience that she underwent. Since I can't do poetry, I am in awe of your simple words and the imagery you created.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this wonderful comment Rachna.
DeletePoignant- simple yet powerful!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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