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They say the first cut
Shall always be the deepest
Oh yes, they were right
Oh yes, they were right
I can see the dark crimson
Flowing out of me
Flowing out of me
Love that I have felt for you
Erasing the pain
Erasing the pain
Taking away everything
I then close my eye
Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Cut.
Poignant.
ReplyDeleteIntended it that way.
DeletePainfully beautiful. I love your Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deletehow true, first cut is true so deep that it's roots run very deep.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautifully expressed words..:)
Thank you! Nice to see you back here after long :)
DeleteThey say it right. It is never the same love twice. And the pain forever persists.
ReplyDeleteI agree.
DeleteLovely! And touching too...yes first cut is the deeeepest!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shaivi!
Deleteits hearbreaking ! the last line '' i close my eye '' is really gloomy ,Soumya !
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Milan!
Deletewhat they say is right .. but then it is also right that one door close the other opens ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
I agree!
DeleteBeautiful Haiku, but heart-breaking :/
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteTrue that...the first cut :) Haiku is not one of my strong points but you have done a wonderful part.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janu :)
DeleteAaahhh!! That first cut!!!! I know how difficult it is to make up a poem or a haiku; I could never do it.. I love you :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeletePoignant !!
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Jyo! :)
DeleteI hope that is not the ebbing of life itself but the flushing out of a bad experience that she underwent. Since I can't do poetry, I am in awe of your simple words and the imagery you created.
ReplyDeleteThank you for this wonderful comment Rachna.
DeletePoignant- simple yet powerful!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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