I did not mean it, it was only to vent
I just wrote it to let go and feel light
Delivery report then said 'Successfully Sent'
I called her back immediately
She did not answer the phone
Before I could redial her number
I heard my phone's message tone
"Its all over", the calligraphic text read
I could not believe my eyes
"I hate you" was written all over
Not once or twice, but thrice
I apologised for my folly
Yet she did not bother to reply
I sat there clutching my phone
Screaming inside wanting to cry
I loved her more than anything else
Her recent cold behaviour I couldn't take
The frustration that I had penned down
Was sent to her by sheer mistake
All the anger was just on the spur
I still loved and wanted her
If I lost her, I wouldn't forgive myself
My vision slowly turned into a blur
Another beep, I wiped away my tears
This juvenile episode I intended to mend
"I love someone else", the message read
And before I knew it, it all came to an end
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
~ Soumya
I dont love poems easily...but this one... wow :)
ReplyDeleteGood one !
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita :)
DeleteClap Clap Clap !!! What a poem .. wonderfully written :)
ReplyDeleteDamn.
ReplyDeleteAt times life is damned :(
Deletenice one
ReplyDeleteAwesome rhyme!
ReplyDeleteYou have such a gift with writing poems! Accesses the heart so easily and makes a point, everytime.
ReplyDeleteThat's a lovely compliment. Thanks :)
DeleteNice one :) Decisions taken at the spur of the moment are always repented :(
ReplyDeleteTotally agree. Thanks for visiting :)
DeleteOh well.
ReplyDeleteYeah :(
DeleteIt was the end when she loved someone else. very sad. WOW post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kalpana.
DeleteI am not much into poems. But loved this one.. except the end though :/
ReplyDeleteThank you Pria. Well, this was the end I had in mind.
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