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I thought I had got the picture right
I worked hard on getting the correct shade
You came along at the perfect time
Ensuring that the colors never fade
As I look back across the years
I can only remember life with you
You were the partner I was looking for
You are my dream that came true
I did not need anyone else
You were everything to me
A friend, a lover and a soul mate
Beyond you my eyes couldn't see
Crowds began to repel me
Everyplace I was searching for your face
With you everything seemed so nice
But without you I was lost in a maze
It was just you and me every where
Together we faced and battled it all
At times I kept your spirits up
And at times you prevented my fall
Holding hands we came a long way
Everybody wanted to break us apart
The poor souls did not know that
We were strongly connected in the heart
Time and again challenges we faced
We saw the true colors of everyone around
We learnt the lesson in a hard way
It is only us until we reach the ground
Everything is uncomplicated this way
It is all sorted without any fuss
I still do not need any body else
Life is complete when it is just us
I am amazed with this work, this is so soulful. The last 2 lines sum it up for the love they have.
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DeleteNaww....cute poem.
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ReplyDeleteHolding hands we came a long way
Everybody wanted to break us apart
The poor souls did not know that
We were strongly connected in the heart
this para reminds me of those days when me and hubby faced our toughest time..trying to convince our families to agree to our wedding!
beautiful poem!
And I'm glad you won :)
DeleteThanks Titli!
Beautiful. The last two lines are amazing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBut without you, I was lost in a maze. This is my favorite line for obvious reasons. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Preethi! :)
DeleteSuch beautiful lines and I can see you have written straight from the heart. Let God always bless you with togetherness and more love forever :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Prasanna! :)
DeleteBeautiful! I love the picture of the jigsaws fitting together so well :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Aathira!
DeleteAww, so full of love. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks Godmother!
DeleteThis poetry from heart for hearts touches hearts :) Simply beautiful I would say.....
ReplyDeleteLovely. You write straight from the heart and it is reflected in your words. :) It is a joy to read you, Soumya.
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Thanks Shantala! :)
DeleteVery sweet! Love the last line, Soumya.
ReplyDeleteWow ! Nicely written and the perfect ode to a lover/partner :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteMesmerizing poem. Love every line:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vishal :)
DeleteSo lovely to read this delightful poem of deep sincere love AND commitment: true love indeed! :) I am SO happy for you! :) On a side note, I have "true colours" mentioned in my U post today! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Elly! <3
DeleteLovely poem. Really expresses the love of a couple beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jo!
DeleteAaahhhh!!!! Its so amazing
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DeleteGood one! Life is complete with "us"..
ReplyDeleteThanks Parul!
DeleteThis is so sweet and full of love ^_^
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