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Three, the minutes left before you leave
Another year of missing your touch
As I count the passing minutes and seconds
Everyday I love you twice as much
Two, our bodies entwined in a dance
Without any music, we glide along
Our eyes form a symphonic melody
As out heartbeats make the perfect song
One, the soul that we share
That keeps me going while you're away
Our memories and love help me breathe
As I dream of this moment, day after day
Such a beautiful, romantic and sensual poem, Soumya. You can sense the longing and the love in the verses. The countdown is so gentle and elegant.
ReplyDeleteThanks for this wonderful comment, Shy!
DeleteJust a story or is it related to you. Either way, the love and attachment is very evident.
ReplyDeleteJust a fictional piece Rachna. Thank you!
Deletesweet and lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Doc!
DeleteThat is just so very romantic. Despite the parting, its the love that comes through more than sadness. I like that.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tulika.
DeleteAh! So delightful this sweet love! Glad I stopped by.
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I'm glad too, thank you.
DeleteAwww it's so hard to stay away from the loved one. Long distance relationships are never easy. But love overcomes all. How beautifully you how expressed the feeling of love and separation.
ReplyDeleteThank you Raj.
Delete"One, the soul that we share
ReplyDeleteThat keeps me going while you're away"
This line is so beautiful! I mean, more beautiful than the beautiful poem you've written, Soumya! <3
Thank you lil one <3
DeleteSuch a romantic poem it is :) I think finally love wins
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It always does :)
DeleteRomantic and I must add it is always the memories that we are left with to cherish when a loved one isnt around!!!!
ReplyDeleteVery true.
DeleteThis reminded me of silk, soft and smooth. That's how effortless and romantic it is :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha, now I feel that too. Thanks Naba :)
DeleteLove this. There is such elegance in the words and it makes for a beautiful and longing read.
ReplyDeleteThank you Aditi! :)
DeleteBeautifully expressed love and parting. I loved how smoothly you worded the romance and the parting without spilling tears.
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinitha.
DeleteLovely
ReplyDeleteTwo, our bodies entwined in a dance
ReplyDeleteWithout any music, we glide along
Our eyes form a symphonic melody
As out heartbeats make the perfect song
nice! imprssive words
Thank you Dhruv.
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