Its not like I don't care
Its not like I don't want to share
I just get frightened that
I'll again get used to you being there
Then you shall leave me behind
Without even turning back
The colors you brought in
Will then soon turn to black
I still want to talk to you
I still want to love and feel
But if I see you everyday
How do you expect me to heal?
My present seems to bother you
My past meant the world to me
How do we get a balance here
Any solution do you see?
When the us broke into me and you
It poisoned me to the core
I don't want to live in a mirage
I'd rather stay alone on the shore
There is no point in more tries
Multiple knots shorten the thread
We can manage to live apart
If not, I guess we'd be long dead
Today what we have become
We have only ourselves to blame
We should have stuck it out together
Instead of being all tough and lame
I still remember your touch
The memories always hurt bad
What's the point in thinking now?
We'll only end up being more sad
I'm sure you'll do good
Being the wonderful person that you are
I'll only want the best for you
Even if you are miles far
I shall always love you
You can still see it in my eyes
The only reason I gave up
Is that I wanted to end my cries
slightly blighty... nice done
ReplyDeletebravo :)
ReplyDeleteHolding on is hard especially when its not as easy as it shud be. Ones the heart is hurt it becomes a skeptic and nothing makes it stable enough to trust. Sometimes letting go is the best for both. Life goes on and time heals the hurt. We can be hopeful cant we ?
ReplyDeleteWe can manage to live apart. True line!
Beautiful. Really. I believe only very few people write poetry well. Yours makes my heart ache. :)
ReplyDeleteI envy the way you write. :)
P.s HUG! :) maybe you need it :)
Beautiful !!
ReplyDeleteIf he reads it anytime, I am sure he'd understand.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
That's ALL the insecurities in our relationships put weaved together beautifully in a poem. I loved this piece...
ReplyDeleteThis happens to be one of the most genuine posts I've read in a very long time. Heartfelt. Profound. Honest.
ReplyDeleteLoved it. :)
Hi five for this one! :)
ReplyDeletePerfect!
Love, Risha :)
:-)
ReplyDeleteRight from the heart. As usual.
There's an award waiting for you here :
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optimism has its own beauty that tends to attract people :) straight from the heart kind of poetry...liked it!
ReplyDeletePS : i liked ur blog's title and theme too..good wrk..following u :D
sarah
There is only one word for this piece.. Brilliance.
ReplyDeleteThe way you write is just absolutely amazing, keep it up! <3
touching.
ReplyDeletehappy blogging gurl!
If there is one word I could say about this post, then that is BEAUTIFUL. It's not a post, feelings they are.
ReplyDeleteYou almost made me cry with the last line.
GOD bless you Soumya.
P.S: Excellent pictures too :)
wow.. from the bottom of the heart it goes to the bottom of the heart.. :)
ReplyDeleteWeakest LINK
Beautiful, i could feel every word you poured out there...
ReplyDeleteHugs!
Again a soulful piece ,ahhh it moves me...beautiful.! life is strange and hard to fathom that goes with love also.Love this line I still want to talk to you
ReplyDeleteI still want to love and feel
But if I see you everyday
How do you expect me to heal?
@quartertoinsane,
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
@Muhammad Israr,
Thank you so much :)
@Red Handed,
You bet we can!
@Srinidhi,
Awww that's a compliment. Envy? Lady, you are a fabulous writer too :)
Hugs!
@Mishi,
Thanks dear.
@BA,
I hope he does. Thank you :)
@Priyanka,
Thank you :)
@Felicity,
Woaaah! Thank you so much :)
@Risha Kalra,
Hi five! Thank you so much :)
@Shobhit,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and thank you more for the award :)
@subtlescribbler,
Thank you so much for visiting and following :)
@Ben,
Thank you <3
@Ginger,
Thanks lady!
@Animesh Ganguly,
Aww thank you so much :)
@Rachit,
It does? Mission accomplished then! Thanks :)
@Rashmi,
Thank you :)
Hugs!
@Angel,
Thanks dear :)
IT's AMAZING TO SEE HOW EVERYTHING, POEM, STORY WHTEVER, STARTS RELATING ITSELF TO MY OWN LIFE :]
ReplyDelete"When the us broke into me and you
ReplyDeleteIt poisoned me to the core
I don't want to live in a mirage
I'd rather stay alone on the shore"
The BEST OF THE BESTS part.
@Ifra Khaliq,
ReplyDeleteIt does? :)
@KN.,
Thank you :)
Soumya,
ReplyDeleteTrust in a relationship is like silken thread. Once it breaks you may join it by tying up but then the knot remains. Feelings after break up said so well in poetic way.
Take care