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It's only on rainy days
That I think of you
The memories piercing
Still fresh as dew
It rained that day
When you held my hand
As you held me close
Against the wet land
Those drops of water
Sliding down your lips
Made me go crazy
As your hands felt my hips
Love or lust, hard to say
Meant something, it sure did
You and I, together
Naked emotions, nothing hid
The passion was great
As we created fire
Embedded in one another
We learnt about desire
Year after year
The feeling did last
And then it all went dark
Like a shadow was cast
It was over quick
Just the way it did start
There was not much pain
Just a void in the heart
Love or lust, hard to say
Most days I just don't care
Yet when the rains come down
You still are present somewhere
It's a sign of your presence
In the petrichor I look for you
A part of me does hope that
Beautiful <3 Though a lost love is painful, the memories it leaves behind are just like the rains. Hard to avoid.
ReplyDeleteI know. Thank you my dear!
Deletethe rain holds beautiful memories for me too!its amazing how certain things bring you back memories! you totally rocked it with this one!
ReplyDeleteShubhangi @ The Little Princess
Thanks Shubhangi :)
DeleteBeautifully sad...
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Mayuri!
DeleteAlways gets goosebumps when I read your romantic poetry. Loving the tenderness in this one and rains do have a magical feel when it comes to romance. Wistful tone in the end ties so well with the petrichor--ah memories.
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear! <3
DeleteIt's so painful... reminds me of someone. Only, I know that the person doesn't think of me when she looks at the rain...
ReplyDeleteOh ho! I hope she does sometime soon.
DeleteWah, wah! Whatte romantic poem!
ReplyDeleteLike I said before, epic facepalm!
DeleteOh how beautiful... the feeling of desire and longing ... mixed so well.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Raj!
DeleteSuch a beautiful poem this is Soumya! I admire the way you bring out the emotions, in this case the pain so beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you Reema! :)
DeleteYou put it across very baeutifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you Subha!
DeleteOoh wowwww! Soumya, that was so lovely!congrats!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa!
DeleteBeautiful and poignantly heart-melting
ReplyDeleteThank you Nisha!
DeleteBeautifully romantic and painful at the same time!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nibha!
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