Six months may not seem long
But our journey of togetherness does
Every day has been an adventure
You give my life the bubbly buzz
We seem to be the topic of discussion of late
I don't know if its jealousy or they are happy for us
I love the way you taught me to handle it
Accepting and ignoring without a fuss
It all feels like a beautiful dream
I thought commitment was not for me
You pulled me right out of the phobia
You showed me the amazing beauty of 'we'
The passion that I see in your eyes
Keeps the madness in me going
You are my strength and my oar for life
With which we shall keep our love boat rowing
We did come together just by chance
But it all seems so perfect now
God might not have always been kind to me
But for this, in front of God I shall always bow
You are my teacher when I'm ignorant
When I'm angry you are my punching bag
You turn into a cuddly bear when I'm upset
Talking softly to me, without once being a nag
Why would I not fall in love with you
Every missing part of me you seemed to fill
'You complete me' would be an understatement
For you, I would gladly die or even kill
The happy smile on your face
Makes me want to live longer
The tight embrace of your arms
Is the reason why today I'm stronger
I shall stand by you till the end of time
No matter what ever negatives life poses
As long as we are together, life would be like
Sleeping on a bed of roses
~ Soumya
awww that was sooo sweet :D
ReplyDeleteThanks dear!
DeleteYou know you're going to get a thousand 'Awwwwwwwws' for this na?? :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteKinda :D
DeleteAwwwwww... so heart-touching. I have never read a simple yet such a strong poem that touches the chords of your heart.
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Keirthana
Thank you so much Keirthana and welcome here! :)
DeleteAwesome Soumya as always! Wishing you guys many more lives together.
ReplyDeleteSuper smiles plus a power hug <3
Thanks dear! <3
DeleteBeautiful :) Couldn't get better :D :D *touchwood* to the wonderful feeling of love!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
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ReplyDeleteThere is no greater beauty in life than the gift of love...I know because I exist in the image of love...it's what I know, what I write about and who I am. May your love continue to grow and may love always guide your footsteps in pleasant places. Nicely penned! Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn...
Come join my writing challenge that I hold monthly over at my other blog Lovers' Cove. The challenge is to write 15 words or less BUT your line has to continue on in thought from the previous person in the Linky. Hope you can make it! Come see here...
Thanks David sir. I'll surely come and join :)
DeleteSoumya,
ReplyDeleteFeelings of being strongly in love told so well. Keep writing more and more. Fantastic.
Take care
PS : Please do something about locating comments / home as I had to find these by hit & trial.
Thank you Jack.
DeleteI was just trying out the template, hope its fine now.
:O My comment didn't post! :O
ReplyDeleteI am delighted to have been part of your journey. Part of the joy is knowing the person deserves the happiness they feel now. Stay happy lady :-) :*
Thank you so much love :*
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