Etheree: Life & Love


Life
Moves on
Sun shall shine
The past must leave
Be prepared for it
Nature intended this
How can you try to change it
Destiny or fate, it is yours
It is up to you, which path you take
Pain of yesterday or smiles of today

This is my first attempt at an Etheree. The below one is a reversed Etheree.


She watched from far and shed a silent tear
When he kissed his bride at the alter
She smiled and laughed at his tales
Knowing he loved someone else
Stood by his side always
Without him knowing
More than herself
Him Truly
She did
Love

~ Soumya

12 comments:

  1. I don't know if they are supposed to be separate poems :) but I love the way they work with each other. She just needs to decide between the pain of yesterday, or the smiles of today :)

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  2. This one sided love story looks like 'life ke saath bhi, life ke baad bhi' :D

    Nice one!

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Haha, moving into insurance are we? :P

      Thanks!

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  3. Loved it!
    p.s read your interview with blogadda.. Great job! :) Girl you are going to reach great heights, mark my words!

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  4. Wow! I don't know much about the styles, but this must be tough! So lovely! :D

    PS: Read and thoroughly enjoyed your interview! Carpe' Diem! :D

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    1. Not tough, challenging maybe :)

      Thank you darling!

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  5. Wow..this is so beautiful. :) Especially the name: Etheree. It's a lot similar to Nonet na!

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    1. Thanks my dear :)

      Its a lot like a Nonet, just an extra line and a extra syllable to be added.

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