I love you
More than everything
Nothing else shall ever matter
Its you who was meant to be mine
The one who stole my heart
The one whom I yearn for
Shall always be you
The best gift of God
The best gift of God
Shall always be you
The one whom I yearn for
The one who stole my heart
Its you who was meant to be mine
Nothing else shall ever matter
More than everything
I love you
This is a palindrome poem. Read it from the top or the bottom it is still the same.
Written for Poetry Jam.
~ Soumya
Wow! Lovely!
ReplyDeletep.s am eagerly waiting for the next post in your 'The honest post' series! :)
Thank you Chandana! :)
DeleteThe next phase coming soon.
So sweet... and well written. Thanks so much for participating at Poetry Jam.
ReplyDeleteThank you Laurie for the amazing prompt.
DeleteYour welcome!
Delete:)
DeleteJust Wow!!
ReplyDeleteAgree with chandana. Bring out the next phase soon!! :)
Thank you and i sure will. Soon.
DeleteThis is excellent i love how you have captured the tenderness in both poems.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Alan.
Deletesmiles....at the thought of your love being the greatest gift from god...that is very cool...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian!
DeleteOne can't say it too many times!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely. There can never be too much love.
DeleteI love this! :) Never heard of a palindrome poem, but this seems awesome!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Try it out!
DeleteNow that is some serious talent right there!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAnd live the first comment says, next honest post pls?!
Thank you Red darling. Next phase, coming soon :)
DeleteWow, you really worked the prompt beautifully. Amazing, isn't it, how when one reads words in reverse they sometimes appear STRONGER.
ReplyDeleteStronger is the word. Thank you!
DeleteLovely.. So well written.. :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you darling :)
DeleteYou have got some serious talent with poems. And when you said 'Read it from the top or the bottom it is still the same', its the meaning right.? I started reading line by line and then word by word looking for the palindrome. :-)
ReplyDeleteMeaning too yes. But the palindrome is like this. The first line is same as the last line. The second line is same as the last second line and so on. Artha aitha eega?
DeleteThanks Anisha.
ReplyDeleteI never knew poetry has evolved into so many myriad forms. Darn!
ReplyDeleteNice read there.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
I didn't either until a while ago. Thank you :)
DeleteVery nice! Lovely both ways, and I like how you shifted the pictures too--clever:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you ;)
DeleteBeautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThank you for visiting :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!
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