No Bias October 09, 2013 green becomes red natural progression no bias - life! This haiku is written for the Write Tribe Contest 2 at Write Tribe. ~ Soumya Labels contest Haiku life write tribe Comments SrinidhiOctober 9, 2013 at 7:15 PMIt is beautiful.Me tried too. But sadly no luck :(ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 10, 2013 at 12:00 PMThank you love.Tried what?DeleteRepliesReplySrinidhiOctober 11, 2013 at 8:39 PMThis haiku prompt. :PDeleteRepliesReplySoumyaOctober 12, 2013 at 10:57 PMGo try again :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyʞɐOctober 9, 2013 at 8:48 PMThat's short and precisely describes life.Well written. ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 10, 2013 at 12:01 PMThank you Ajay.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyWritingsForLifeOctober 9, 2013 at 9:10 PMThe best time of the year :-) ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRed HandedOctober 10, 2013 at 3:03 PMGorgeous way to describe such a beautiful time of life!!!ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 10, 2013 at 3:14 PMThank you my love :*DeleteRepliesReplyReplykalpana solsiOctober 10, 2013 at 11:54 PMGreen becomes red. the ripening process well described in colour and minimal words.ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 11, 2013 at 12:28 PMThank you!DeleteRepliesReplyReplyKParthasarathiOctober 11, 2013 at 6:49 PMVery truly and nicely said-a natural progressionReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 12, 2013 at 11:17 PMThank you KP.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyPreeti S.October 11, 2013 at 8:40 PMNature is unbiased, yes. Thats the beauty of it. Well penned. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 12, 2013 at 11:18 PMThank you :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyStranger!October 12, 2013 at 1:16 PMWonderful! :) Loved it. ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 12, 2013 at 11:19 PMThank you ji :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplynorrbuOctober 12, 2013 at 9:56 PMno bias only for time, and that too only if it does not bend. ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 12, 2013 at 11:19 PMNature doesn't have a bias is what I meant.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyKeirthanaOctober 13, 2013 at 3:12 PMYou have the entire nature portrayed in a few words!ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 13, 2013 at 3:21 PM:)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyPhenoMenonOctober 15, 2013 at 5:05 PMThank you for the entry and sorry for the delay in responding. My system crashed and I was a "virtually" challenged for a few daysPhenoMenonReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 16, 2013 at 12:16 PMThank you for a brilliant prompt. Hope your system is doing well now :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyUnknownOctober 16, 2013 at 9:57 AMNice portrayal of nature.ReplyDeleteRepliesSoumyaOctober 16, 2013 at 12:16 PMThanks Geeta!DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Just like me, say what you feel. While constructive criticism is welcome, please keep it subtle and kind. Thank you!
It is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteMe tried too. But sadly no luck :(
Thank you love.
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This haiku prompt. :P
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DeleteThat's short and precisely describes life.
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Thank you Ajay.
DeleteThe best time of the year :-)
ReplyDeleteGorgeous way to describe such a beautiful time of life!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you my love :*
DeleteGreen becomes red. the ripening process well described in colour and minimal words.
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DeleteVery truly and nicely said-a natural progression
ReplyDeleteThank you KP.
DeleteNature is unbiased, yes. Thats the beauty of it. Well penned. :)
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DeleteWonderful! :) Loved it.
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Deleteno bias only for time, and that too only if it does not bend.
ReplyDeleteNature doesn't have a bias is what I meant.
DeleteYou have the entire nature portrayed in a few words!
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DeleteThank you for the entry and sorry for the delay in responding. My system crashed and I was a "virtually" challenged for a few days
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Thank you for a brilliant prompt. Hope your system is doing well now :)
DeleteNice portrayal of nature.
ReplyDeleteThanks Geeta!
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