Moving On


"He definitely doesn't look like just a friend to me", Naina says quoting in the air after Kabir gives me a good bye hug before leaving.

"Oh, come on ya... I like him, but I'm not sure if it is love", I blush as I watch him drive away.

"I think he loves you Mili, his eyes say so", she sounded very confident.

"How can you be so sure?", I ask curiously.

"I know that look, after all I was married to him once", she smiles sadly.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

~ Soumya

46 comments:

  1. Omg no! I did not see that coming. Brilliant!

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  2. Another highly emotionally uncomfortable situation of which I would rather never be a part of. But yes, so succinct and powerful. Brilliant.

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  3. Disaster !!
    You start with hugs and romance only to find out the end in fire.

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  4. Okayy.. That's such a different take.. !!

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  5. Whoa...nice way to end the story..!

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  6. Man, this was something! Shocking end yet loved it :)

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  7. A nice twist in the last line and sad as well.

    wow attempt at the prompt :)

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  8. Small wonder, such confidence. Must have come as a real shock! :)

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  9. Gosh! That must be so shocking for her!! :P

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    1. It happens to some people you know. </3

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  11. awesome didn't expect that end :) :)

    http://surabhiitsmyway.blogspot.in/

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  12. Oh Soumya!
    You are just fabulous with flash fictions! :D

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  13. You pack so much punch in so few words.That is a gift

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    1. Thank you KP for that awesome comment! :)

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  14. Woow Naina is some girl, so easily talking to her ex-husband's new girl

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  15. You're just a master of twisting...always with that last line :) *claps*

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  16. Here after quite a while and loving the last few posts that I read...lovely write up, Soumya!

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    1. Thanks Uma! Nice to see you here after long!

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