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Moving On


"He definitely doesn't look like just a friend to me", Naina says quoting in the air after Kabir gives me a good bye hug before leaving.

"Oh, come on ya... I like him, but I'm not sure if it is love", I blush as I watch him drive away.

"I think he loves you Mili, his eyes say so", she sounded very confident.

"How can you be so sure?", I ask curiously.

"I know that look, after all I was married to him once", she smiles sadly.

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

~ Soumya
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  1. Midnight scribblesMarch 2, 2014 at 3:10 PM

    Omg no! I did not see that coming. Brilliant!

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  2. Sushree DashMarch 2, 2014 at 3:38 PM

    Oh my God ....that was fab....

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  3. Preeti S.March 2, 2014 at 4:20 PM

    Another highly emotionally uncomfortable situation of which I would rather never be a part of. But yes, so succinct and powerful. Brilliant.

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  4. Shabab KhanMarch 2, 2014 at 5:18 PM

    Disaster !!
    You start with hugs and romance only to find out the end in fire.

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  5. Wings of HarmonyMarch 2, 2014 at 6:11 PM

    Whoa!! That was goooood!! :D

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  6. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 2, 2014 at 6:44 PM

    Okayy.. That's such a different take.. !!

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  7. RinayaMarch 2, 2014 at 8:19 PM

    Whoa...nice way to end the story..!

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  8. BloggerWloggerMarch 2, 2014 at 8:29 PM

    Man, this was something! Shocking end yet loved it :)

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  9. Anmol RawatMarch 2, 2014 at 11:49 PM

    A nice twist in the last line and sad as well.

    wow attempt at the prompt :)

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  10. Rupasi March 3, 2014 at 11:12 AM

    Whoa what was that!!! :-)

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  11. Anita Jeyan March 3, 2014 at 12:04 PM

    :-o

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  12. Pink Diary's Beauty SecretsMarch 3, 2014 at 12:13 PM

    Nice one :-)

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  13. Anita SabatMarch 3, 2014 at 6:00 PM

    Small wonder, such confidence. Must have come as a real shock! :)

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  14. Shilpa GargMarch 3, 2014 at 10:25 PM

    Gosh! That must be so shocking for her!! :P

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  15. srinidhiMarch 4, 2014 at 11:10 AM

    Ouchie!!

    Sigh. </3

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  16. ghosh.surabhi@gmail.comMarch 4, 2014 at 4:29 PM

    awesome didn't expect that end :) :)

    http://surabhiitsmyway.blogspot.in/

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  17. SrishTiMarch 4, 2014 at 6:48 PM

    Oh Soumya!
    You are just fabulous with flash fictions! :D

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  18. VinatiMarch 4, 2014 at 10:10 PM

    Oooo..that last line! :O

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  19. KParthasarathiMarch 5, 2014 at 11:11 AM

    You pack so much punch in so few words.That is a gift

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  20. DeepaMarch 6, 2014 at 11:04 AM

    Woow Naina is some girl, so easily talking to her ex-husband's new girl

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  21. HardiMarch 7, 2014 at 5:23 AM

    You're just a master of twisting...always with that last line :) *claps*

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  22. UmaMarch 18, 2014 at 3:00 PM

    Here after quite a while and loving the last few posts that I read...lovely write up, Soumya!

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    1. SoumyaMarch 19, 2014 at 1:01 PM

      Thanks Uma! Nice to see you here after long!

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