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Shadows Of Silence

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I look at you through the fire
As my heart skips a beat
Your aura is enveloping me
Along with this naked heat

This camp fire is setting the mood
Oh my love, now come to me
Ignore this ignorant crowd
For once, together let us be

Why do you look away
I know you feel the same
It is about time we accept it
I'm tired of playing this game

Your chocolate skin invites me
I want to feel the taste of your lips
Your dark hair is driving me crazy
I want to run my fingers on your svelte hips

I see the passion in your eyes
Isn't it time that we accept it now
Why are you letting it slip
Aren't you seeing the signs sent from above

I have never felt love like this before
Life has been beautiful since then
Let us have a tale together
Our love story I'd love to pen

How long before you understand
When will you ever speak a word
I have told you all that I felt
Were my voices never heard

I don't know what else to do
My feelings can't you sense
Can you hear the sound of my heart beat
Or is it lost in the shadows of silence


This poem is written for the Wordy Wednesday #8 at the B-A-R.

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  1. The EnchantressMarch 11, 2015 at 7:14 PM

    How much I love the new look Soumya :) AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE

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  2. AathiraMarch 11, 2015 at 8:56 PM

    Sensuous and romantic! Really really nice, Babe :)

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  3. Ankita March 11, 2015 at 11:39 PM

    That was a very nice and deep poem, I loved it :)

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  4. Shilpa GargMarch 12, 2015 at 12:15 AM

    Lovely! Can feel the intense longing! Good one for the prompt!

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  5. sulekkhaMarch 12, 2015 at 1:06 AM

    Congratulations on your blog's 6th anniversary :) Absolutely loved your poem.

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  6. ʞɐMarch 12, 2015 at 10:24 AM

    Brimming with romance.

    Nicely penned. :)

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    1. SoumyaMarch 19, 2015 at 12:36 PM

      Thank you Ajay! Nice to see you here after long :)

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  7. NabanitaMarch 12, 2015 at 10:36 AM

    So romantic this one :)

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  8. HardiMarch 12, 2015 at 10:40 AM

    Lovely poem!

    I almost thought I was reading someone else's blog! I love how everything is so clean and pulled together :)

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  9. elly stornebrinkMarch 12, 2015 at 12:27 PM

    The words "lovely poem" came immediately to my mind as I finished the last line. And a great picture too match! ;) (I think you may enjoy my post with the same prompt and similar theme - http://xpressyouressence.blogspot.ca/2015/03/wordy-wednesday-4-shadows-of-silence_11.html ;) <3

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    1. SoumyaMarch 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM

      Thank you Elly! Your post is awesome too :)

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  10. AnonymousMarch 12, 2015 at 1:22 PM

    Beautiful poem Soumya

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  11. RajlakshmiMarch 12, 2015 at 3:58 PM

    ahh how romantic and mushy mushy :D beautiful expressions :)

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    1. SoumyaMarch 19, 2015 at 12:38 PM

      Thanks you so much for the wonderful prompt :)

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  12. Midnight scribblesMarch 13, 2015 at 12:37 AM

    wow that was beautifully expressed!

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  13. UnknownMarch 13, 2015 at 5:37 AM

    Congratulations on the 6th anniversary and keep writing ! :) Amazing theme and word play of the poem... I loved how you expressed the character's love pangs. Great work !

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  14. AnonymousMarch 16, 2015 at 10:29 PM

    Goosebumps :O
    So so so so romantic and sensuous... :O

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  15. SuzyMarch 17, 2015 at 4:13 PM

    I can feel the yearning. Very romantic.

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