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Shadows Of Silence

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I look at you through the fire
As my heart skips a beat
Your aura is enveloping me
Along with this naked heat

This camp fire is setting the mood
Oh my love, now come to me
Ignore this ignorant crowd
For once, together let us be

Why do you look away
I know you feel the same
It is about time we accept it
I'm tired of playing this game

Your chocolate skin invites me
I want to feel the taste of your lips
Your dark hair is driving me crazy
I want to run my fingers on your svelte hips

I see the passion in your eyes
Isn't it time that we accept it now
Why are you letting it slip
Aren't you seeing the signs sent from above

I have never felt love like this before
Life has been beautiful since then
Let us have a tale together
Our love story I'd love to pen

How long before you understand
When will you ever speak a word
I have told you all that I felt
Were my voices never heard

I don't know what else to do
My feelings can't you sense
Can you hear the sound of my heart beat
Or is it lost in the shadows of silence


This poem is written for the Wordy Wednesday #8 at the B-A-R.

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  1. How much I love the new look Soumya :) AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEE

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  2. Sensuous and romantic! Really really nice, Babe :)

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  3. That was a very nice and deep poem, I loved it :)

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  4. Lovely! Can feel the intense longing! Good one for the prompt!

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  5. Congratulations on your blog's 6th anniversary :) Absolutely loved your poem.

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  6. Brimming with romance.

    Nicely penned. :)

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    1. Thank you Ajay! Nice to see you here after long :)

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  7. Lovely poem!

    I almost thought I was reading someone else's blog! I love how everything is so clean and pulled together :)

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  8. The words "lovely poem" came immediately to my mind as I finished the last line. And a great picture too match! ;) (I think you may enjoy my post with the same prompt and similar theme - http://xpressyouressence.blogspot.ca/2015/03/wordy-wednesday-4-shadows-of-silence_11.html ;) <3

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    1. Thank you Elly! Your post is awesome too :)

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  9. Beautiful poem Soumya

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  10. ahh how romantic and mushy mushy :D beautiful expressions :)

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    1. Thanks you so much for the wonderful prompt :)

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  11. Congratulations on the 6th anniversary and keep writing ! :) Amazing theme and word play of the poem... I loved how you expressed the character's love pangs. Great work !

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  12. Goosebumps :O
    So so so so romantic and sensuous... :O

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  13. I can feel the yearning. Very romantic.

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