Three, Two, One

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Three, the minutes left before you leave
Another year of missing your touch
As I count the passing minutes and seconds
Everyday I love you twice as much

Two, our bodies entwined in a dance
Without any music, we glide along
Our eyes form a symphonic melody
As out heartbeats make the perfect song

One, the soul that we share
That keeps me going while you're away
Our memories and love help me breathe
As I dream of this moment, day after day

28 comments:

  1. Such a beautiful, romantic and sensual poem, Soumya. You can sense the longing and the love in the verses. The countdown is so gentle and elegant.

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    1. Thanks for this wonderful comment, Shy!

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  2. Just a story or is it related to you. Either way, the love and attachment is very evident.

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    1. Just a fictional piece Rachna. Thank you!

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  3. That is just so very romantic. Despite the parting, its the love that comes through more than sadness. I like that.

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  4. Ah! So delightful this sweet love! Glad I stopped by.

    My latest post:

    http://natashamusing.com/2017/05/a-tryst-with-the-clouds-and-the-rolling-hills/

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  5. Awww it's so hard to stay away from the loved one. Long distance relationships are never easy. But love overcomes all. How beautifully you how expressed the feeling of love and separation.

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  6. "One, the soul that we share
    That keeps me going while you're away"

    This line is so beautiful! I mean, more beautiful than the beautiful poem you've written, Soumya! <3

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  7. Such a romantic poem it is :) I think finally love wins

    http://www.simpleindianmom.in/fun-facts-parenting-love-know/

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  8. Romantic and I must add it is always the memories that we are left with to cherish when a loved one isnt around!!!!

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  9. This reminded me of silk, soft and smooth. That's how effortless and romantic it is :)

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    1. Hahaha, now I feel that too. Thanks Naba :)

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  10. Love this. There is such elegance in the words and it makes for a beautiful and longing read.

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  11. Beautifully expressed love and parting. I loved how smoothly you worded the romance and the parting without spilling tears.

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  12. Two, our bodies entwined in a dance
    Without any music, we glide along
    Our eyes form a symphonic melody
    As out heartbeats make the perfect song

    nice! imprssive words

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