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Writing poetry after a long time. Kind of lost touch so please bear with me if it ain't that good.

You have given me reasons to smile
But the infinite tears dissolve them
We split and so did everything else
When together we were like a gem

You my honey were my life
You were so tender, delicate and kind
But the piercing pain I went through
Somehow put you off my mind

I waited for like a zillion years
But hatred was all you gave me
I was tired of shutting it out
When my eyes wanted love to see

You will always be a part of my life
Something like a distant memory
You will remain a beautiful chapter
When I tell my kids my story

But he was there to dry my tears
To make me laugh when I was down
Him being the arrogant bastard
For me dint mind being a clown

His gigantic ego just goes poof
He makes me feel like a woman and a child
He knows to take care of me when I cry
And to tame me when I act wild

He's the venom that's spread to me
Making me what I am today
I don't regret any part of him
This I shall proudly say

If there is a need, there it is
You just cant evade that fact
Both us being wild and fierce
Are bound by an invisible pact

You were the earth that kept me grounded
He's the cool air that blends with my fire
Dry burnt earth was never pretty
But hot air can evoke deep desire

You're the sweet honey that I loved
But love him I can't and never will
Inspite of this disturbing fact
This damn poison refuses to kill


  1. Absolutely AMAZING!!!

    my favourite lines.. 'You will always be a part of my life Something like a distant memory' :) Perfectly phrased. :) :*

  2. Beautiful touched my heart..I had something to relate to it..*sad smiles*

  3. It's really nice and you compared it with poison, nice touch

    Stay Blessed ^_^

  4. beautiful... very nice from you :) thanks for sharing :)

  5. You just wrote the story of my I use the word beautiful here or breath taking...maybe breath taking,yes breath taking..

  6. The POISON, remains there forever. And the POISON is what scares me to drink that sea to quench my thirst that people happen to call love.

    Love is contagious. It's poisonous if gone all wrong.

  7. Wow. Just wow.
    I can't seem to work up the words to make detailed comments on your posts, they leave me reeling with emotion on some kind.

    Last but one paragraph, mindblowing

  8. Love is a potion - poisonous, magical and medicinal :)

    poignant and painful!


  9. Soumya,

    Some things are hard to forget. So one should keep happy memories and forget sad ones. Life has to move on. Composed very nicely to convey what you feel for someone even now.

    Take care

    PS : Visiting after a long gap, reasons for which you would know if you read Age Catching Up in my space. Caught up with all pending posts leaving comments from Chaotic Truth onwards.

  10. Great lines you got again ,soulful ! but am afraid of the pic , aren't you afraid of snakes?

  11. Mind-blasting lines, not mind blowing but mind blasting.

  12. You will always be a part of my life
    Something like a distant memory
    You will remain a beautiful chapter
    When I tell my kids my story..

    nicely this paragraph the most :

  13. @Srinidhi,
    Thank you girl. Muaah :)

    Should I be glad that you could relate to it? :)

    Thank you :)

    @Muhammed Israr,
    Thank you and welcome :)

    OMG! Thank you so much :)

    Thirst exactly! That's why freaked out about drinking it.

    Thank you my chocolate queen. I was talking about the sun signs in the last but one, I'm glad you got that :)

    True that and thank you :)

    Heya! I'm so glad you're back. Thank you so much. I always look forward to your comments.

    Thanks dear. Nope, I'm afraid only of love, nothing else.

    @Atrocious Scribblings,
    Woohoo, thanks :)

    @the other side of me,
    Thank you and welcome to my blog :)

  14. Ayein! I came here read, and liked and I wonder where did my comment disappear :'( May be I read in google reader then...

    :) Long time Sowmya, I love the poem and I do recall telling that I do not think you have lost touch at all...This is as beautiful as it can get!

    PS: And yeah, he is my husband :D

    Chintu Singh

  15. @Chintu,
    Thank you so much. Husband? Woohoo, seriously lucky you. Actually lucky both of you :)


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