Wish you were here

Wish you were here
Holding me tight and close
I wanna feel your breath
And gently peck your nose
I wanna hear you whisper
Softly into my ear
Its just this time
Now on, I'll always be near

~ Soumya

18 comments:

  1. This was so cute and deep.
    You described it beautifully. :-)

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  2. Either love or distance between the two can bring out such beautiful words.
    loved it :)

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  3. Romantic to the core and full of soft vibes of love...

    Loved it!

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  4. The last line....melted my heart
    This was beautiful and I truly mean it.
    And that click! Niceeeee

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  5. Aww...so mushy lushy!! Loved it. :)

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  6. Short and sweet and expressive. I like! :D

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  7. Reminds me of Pink Floyd. Love and the distance, deadly, bounded to bring out the poet in you!

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  8. This is so cute! I fell in love with the lines.Beautiful!

    My world, my thoughts, my musings...

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  9. @Paanipuri Lover,
    Thank you :)

    @CD!!!,
    In this case, it is both :)
    Thanks.

    @Jidhu Jose,
    Thank you :)

    @quartertoinsane,
    Thanks :)

    @Saru Singhal,
    Thanks :)

    @Red,
    Thanks Red.
    Awww thanks, that's me!! :)

    @sumitra,
    Thank you :)

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  10. @Mirage,
    Thanks dear :)

    @Confused Soul,
    Thank you :D

    @~Moonlight~,
    Bound to yeah!! :)

    @phatichar,
    Thanks :)

    @Seяendipity™,
    It is? Well love is meant to be poignant at times :)

    @Upasana
    Thank you dear and welcome here :)

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  11. Ah , missing the loved ones . :\
    Cute poem :)

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