The skies were still blue
And the birds were all flying free
The yellow sun dazzled a smile
Shining down on both you and me
Joy seemed to be the only subject
Madness anyway was taking its toll
The incomplete tome ceased to exist
As you and me came together as whole
We walked along the desert of joy
From strangers to companions for life
Without letting me know of it
You helped me let go of the strife
Rockbottom was what I knew
And then I loaded it with more nonsensical crap
You made me take a forever stance
Together we gave the past a perfect wrap
Even the times when I was away
With every breath I sensed your smell
Although miles separated us
You caught me when I slipped and fell
You put an end to every ugly memoir
Removed the flag from the past's crack
You held my face in your palms
Never letting me once look back
Days after days of sharing life
Every puzzle began to fall in place
Slowly, gently holding my hands
You walked with me out of the maze
You didn't try to infuse colors
In my practical life of black and white
You just blended into my pale saga
Never letting go and holding on tight
The life we see now is magical
You freed me of my anger and the pain
You made me win the battle against myself
And did not let my struggles go in vain
I don't know when I fell in love
It was so magical that I couldn't stop to think
Coming to think of it now
I guess I fell for you in the first blink
When you asked me to marry you
Holding a ring in the pleasant summer chill
There was not much to say
Apart from a happy "Yes, I will"
wrapping the past.. wow , i like it lots
ReplyDeleteand "freed me from anger"..
Congratulations to both of you
Joy fill your way throughout!
Thanks you so much :)
DeleteI don't understand poetry a lot so I could be wrong here but if this is what I think it is - CONGRATULATIONS
ReplyDeleteLet the party begin.
Cheers :)
It is what you think it is, thanks :)
DeleteCheers!
So you're engaged? Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteUnofficially yes, Thanks!
DeleteWow.. yayieee .. me so happy for you babe :* :D ... and the poem was so happy happy.. lovey-dovey :D .. awesome :)
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much :)
DeleteAww... this is so beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Raajii.. Good to see you back here :)
DeleteLovely the story of two of you
ReplyDeleteNow better stick together like a glue :)
Aha, not bad! isn't?
So happy for ya champ. Congo, when the wedding bells are ringing?
Wooaaah, not bad at all! My effect spreads, I can see ;)
DeleteThanks dearie, wedding bells later this year :D
Oye hoye!!! kya baat hai.. :-)
ReplyDelete*khushi wali hug*
Brilliant composition of words. Every single emotion could be felt...from the start to the end. And that end...Wow!! You are one hell of a poetess.
Muah!
Arey arey *Blushes*
DeleteThank you so much dearie. Muaaaah.
*Hugs*
congrats :D
ReplyDeleteThanks you so much :)
Deletecongrats
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteI don't know you...and I've just started reading you...but I really hope that the above is true. More so because my life is suddenly falling apart...its good to know others' lives are coming together.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
Its all true. Don't worry, I have reached here after crumbling down and seeing rock bottom. Everything shall pass, everything does.
DeleteThank you and all the best for your life. Just believe, it will all be right.
Thank you sir!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Leo!!!!!! And finally you've found your anchor! :)
ReplyDeleteI did :D
DeleteThanks!
Maduve oota banthappo... *rubs hands with glee... :D
ReplyDeleteCongrats! God bless...wish you both all the happiness for life.
Not yet, salpa wait maad beku :P
DeleteThank you so much.
This one made me go like awww...Heartiest congratulations to both of you :* :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :*
Deleteloved the intrinsic flow :)
ReplyDeleteWeakest LINK
Hahaha thanks :)
DeleteI've been reading your blog for so long. It's like I've literally seen you go through all the phases, rock-bottom included. All I can say you one hell of a woman, always positive, extremely strong. And I am really happy for you!
ReplyDelete♥ www.thegirlatfirstavenue.com
Thanks Chandana, this means so much to me :)
DeleteSoumya,
ReplyDeleteRead 2 posts now. Very sane advice in previous post with truth so well told. Beautiful poem. Hope this is true for you.
Take care
It sure is true!
DeleteThanks.
your blog is really looking simple and elegant.,
ReplyDeletecan i know which template did you applied?
i would like to give the same present look to my blog. Unable to know how to as i relatively new to the blogging. feels happy if you wish to share that process.
every post is beautiful., excited.
Thank you so much and welcome here!
DeleteThis is the simple white default template from blogger. Ofcourse the header is mine.
OMG! It is what I think it is!! CONGRATSSSSS!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteTo a life of happiness, cheer, togetherness and prosperity!!
Wishes n prayers, Soumya :)
God Bless.
Oh yeah it is! Thankssss :D
DeleteThank you so much!
Damn, he beat me to it :P
ReplyDeleteHere's raising a toast to wish the hottest lioness around a perfect life ahead with her perfect man :) God bless you, babe.
Oh and TREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATAH!!!
The early bird, blah blah :P
DeleteThank you my dear :)
Come down to Bangalore, I'm gonna drag you down to my wedding here :)
Soums been following you..i am just away for few months . have missed you blog and here now i am reading you're getting married lioness ? hahahahaha..i am so happy for you...now i know you are so happy..Best wishes dear..ahhhhhh your life story has a beautiful end though i know life is just about to start...GOd bless you pretty witty !
ReplyDeleteAngel.
Thanks dear :)
DeleteDear congrats..been away for months and here i know now you are getting married..hahaha the lioness is getting married..I am so happy for you... I been following you since from the start ,you know how i love your writing , just few months busy .. Best wishes pretty witty ! God bless you both !
ReplyDeleteThanks again!
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