(Pic: Autumn on the River, 1889, John Singer Sargent )
You got me aboard the floating plank
Although you remained in the freezing cold
It was difficult to even breathe
Just hold on, you repeatedly told
I was ready to give up and die
You held on to faith and my hand
I just believed in your belief
I was sure we would reach land
I laid down and hummed a tune
As you froze, holding on to me
I dreamt of our future together
I believed that we were meant to be
I had given up everything I had
All I wanted was to be with you
This calamity shall soon be behind us
We shall start life afresh and new
I heard the faint sound of a whistle
I knew they would come back for us
With a smile I tried to wake you up
But you had left without a fuss
Even though I knew you had gone
I cried asking you to come back
How was I supposed to live
I was nothing without you Jack
Your promise I shall honor
I shall live, like you wanted me to
I said my silent goodbye to you
And then, the whistle I blew
They took me back on a boat
I looked at you for as long as I could
Our love ship was broken and gone
On whose deck we once stood
I got to land in a while
Feeling completely torn apart
I knew I will hold on to myself
For you were alive in my heart
I moved on, like I promised
But its you, that my heart once chose
A lot of years have passed since you left
Yet, I shall always remain your Rose
Written for The Magpie Tales: Mag 195.
~ Soumya
nice read!!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteVery well crafted but still melancholy
ReplyDeleteMelancholic indeed. Thanks!
DeleteWhat a unique love story it was! Classic!
ReplyDeleteClassic is the word!
DeleteThis is lovely.. As I read your words, I can imagine the Titanic scene.. Sad love story
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteAll I could think was the scene from the movie. Very well written, Soumya.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anisha!
DeleteQuite romantic :)
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL :) :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear :)
DeleteOmg.. you actually bought back memories of Titanic..and the images seemed to be floating in my head..beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteAh Titanic, an artist's rendition of an artist's rendition. Good one there Soumya. :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Thanks BA :)
DeleteI like the connection of your words to the tragedy ....
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen!
DeleteAn Titanic! this is awesome! Great one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteReminded me of the movie ! Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita!
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