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PASS: Stud Boy


I knew he loved me a lot
But I some how did not care
I am not much of a vain person
But I cannot stand facial hair

He was my best friend I agree
But that attraction I couldn't find
I've thought about it many times
More often than not its on my mind

A wonderful and amazing person
Smart and intelligent to the core
But that smelly stubble on him
Made him look like such a bore

My man should look clean and tidy
Should take care of himself very well
He should put an extra effort for me
Must be clean and capture me in his smell

I ignored him for as long as I could
It hurt me inside for hurting a friend
And then I saw him on a Saturday
My dilemma then came to an end

He looked at me with twinkling eyes
His clean shaven look bowled me over
Before I could understand my feelings
I knew he was my perfect lover

I watched him in awe all day long
He kneeled down with a diamond ring
He promised to accept the razor for life
For him then my heart began to sing

Our love grew day by day
Facial hair was snipped in the bud
I married him two months later
My charming, clean shaven stud


This post is a part of Protest Against Unclean Stubble Activity in association with BlogAdda.

~ Soumya
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  1. Anita SabatDecember 30, 2013 at 7:55 PM

    Soumya, Cool poem with all the elements & a happy ending :) Really nice & apt :)
    Thanks for accepting & responding to my Tag. But, we can only respond to one Tag in one post! (3-in-One not allowed!)
    Just put the name of the 1st Tagger! If possible, you can write 2 more Posts for the other 2! Hee Hee! :)
    Best wishes for the Contest :)
    Thanks for your super-kind words for my Posts!
    Thanks for Tagging me here. But, I may not be able to honor it with year-end pending tasks :)

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    1. SoumyaDecember 30, 2013 at 10:46 PM

      Just one tag a post eh? Damn. I thought that I could get away with this :P

      Thank you for your awesome words :)

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    2. Anita SabatDecember 31, 2013 at 4:50 PM

      Soumya, If you must have one Tag, have mine! :) :)
      Will help my points :)
      I must thank you for your real sweet & kind words. Means a lot! :)
      Happy New Year :)

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    3. SoumyaJanuary 2, 2014 at 12:36 PM

      Am I late to add the tag now? :O

      Thank you dear, you deserve those kind words, Happy New Year to you too :)

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  2. NishaDecember 30, 2013 at 8:25 PM

    So cute!! I've been thinking hard on what to write for this contest. It is very challenging to write a creative post on this one :)

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    1. SoumyaDecember 31, 2013 at 11:58 AM

      Thanks Nisha. Oh tell me about it. That's why I stayed away this long :P

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    2. NishaDecember 31, 2013 at 2:23 PM

      Haha.. I finally managed to write something :)

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    3. SoumyaDecember 31, 2013 at 3:45 PM

      Just checked it, you created a manual for men! Wow! :)

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  3. Anmol RawatDecember 30, 2013 at 8:45 PM

    Hey thanks a lot Soumya :)
    Like Anita said, you can accept just one tag in one post :p

    Remove me as I won't be having any place in even top ten lol. So help the one for whom it may make difference :)

    And M sorry as well as I won't be able to accept more tags. I already have 4-5 pending and I can't even accept them. So Extremely sorry. Will help you in the next competition (when it happens).

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    1. SoumyaDecember 31, 2013 at 11:59 AM

      Damn I so wanted to get away with this :P

      No problem, I'll remove the tags since you and Anita are not accepting them :)

      See you during the next contest :)

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  4. VinatiDecember 30, 2013 at 9:40 PM

    Hahah!! You rhyme so well.. I am amazed.

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  5. Dhiren navaniDecember 30, 2013 at 11:21 PM

    WoWWW!!
    Really nice..:)

    http://navanidhiren.blogspot.com/

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  6. Red HandedDecember 31, 2013 at 9:45 AM

    HEHEHEHEH This was funny yet cuteeee!

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  7. A FineappleJanuary 6, 2014 at 11:43 AM

    I was thinking of writing a poem for this contest and it turned out very bad so dint post it.. Count on you to write an awesome poem.. Loved it.. :) its too good.. :) :)

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