I saw the bride arrive. She looked splendid and I felt a strong pang of jealousy. The red veil perfectly matched her flawless complexion. Her face looked resplendent through the netted veil. Her blouse clung snugly to her, highlighting her assets to the T and revealing a slim and svelte waist. The bright red velvet skirt hugged her like a dream vying for reality. The jewellery on her neck seemed to kiss her delicate skin and tickle her as her cheeks turned pink when she blushed. The bangles on her hand produced a melody as she walked slowly towards the man of her dreams. Her anklet gave away soft chimes as if celebrating her union with the man she loves. It was the perfect moment for her. For me, I just had one problem.
She was not me.
He saw his bride arrive. She looked splendid to many but he felt a sense of nothingness. The red was too bright and her complexion irritated him. Her face looked messed under the transparent veil. Her blouse was too revealing and looked skimpy to him. The velvet on her skirt was too shiny and not like the way he had dreamt of. The jewellery cluttered her neck as if trying to choke it, turning her face red. Her bangles clunk against each other creating a shrill noise to his ear as he awaited his nightmare. The squeal of her anklets deafened him almost like a warning of the compromise that he was about to get into. It was the perfect moment for her. For him, he just had one problem.
She was not her.
~ SoumyaShe was not her.
Such contrasting thoughts, I wonder how he got there and how she got got there? Both would make up a wonderful tale on its own merits :D
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Let's leave that to imagination :)
DeleteSometimes I do think about this scene when attend weddings but not the way the guy thought.And this is beautifully written..Soumya,you are just getting better day by day :)
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to read more from you <3
Thank you so much :)
DeleteThe bride described by you is beautiful. A complete mis-match of thoughts , ideas and attitude. very well-written.
ReplyDeleteI loved this...
ReplyDeleteLife can be like thins many a times...
Taking away what we have and never giving what we want!
Mostly life is this way. If you are lucky you get it all.
DeleteThank you :)
This was amazing.. So the lady in the first para is whom the guy in the second para thinking about as "her"?
ReplyDeleteSo beautifully written soumya :) :)
I was hoping to meet you in the indiblogger meet. You were not there :(
Hope to meet you in the next one ?
Precisely! Thank you darling!
DeleteI had an event at work last Sunday, couldn't make it. I was confirmed, but had to call and cancel the last minute :(
Shall try my best to make it next time :)
'Wow' is the word.!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sri :D
DeleteWas it an arranged meeting of the bride and the groom?The same things seem different to different eyes.Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteIf compromised means arranged then I guess.
DeleteThank you!
Sigh...
ReplyDeletereminded me of something..
Oh, hope it doesn't hurt.
DeleteThank you my dear :)
ReplyDeleteit does.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry :(
Deleteaww dont be. life is like that.
DeleteSigh.
DeleteLove it. I have been thinking about stuff like this. But you have written it mind blowingly well.
ReplyDeleteThanks dearie :*
DeleteSurprisingly, it reminds me of
ReplyDeleteOh life, it's bigger
It's bigger than you
And you are not me
The lengths that I will go to
The distance in your eyes
Oh no, I've said too much
I've said enough
That's me in the corner
That's me in the spotlight
Losing my religion
Trying to keep up with you
And I don't know if I can do it
Oh no, I've said too much
I haven't said enough
~REM
Only if she knew.
Cheers,
<a href="http://aestheticblasphemy.com>Blasphemous Aesthete</a>
That was beautiful :)
DeleteBut then again, what if she knew.
Wow! You are an amazing story teller. You know this right? :*
ReplyDeleteAm I? :P
DeleteThanks love <3
Loved it .. First time visitor to your blog.. Keep it coming
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteLoved it..first time visitor to your blog ..keep it coming :)
ReplyDeleteAnd welcome to my space :)
DeleteThe happiness and the sadness. The excitement and the disappointment: so beautifully depicted.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anisha!
DeleteSigh. Yes, some of life's biggest tragedies.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah. Sigh!
DeleteHmmm...some memories came back.
ReplyDeleteOh. Hope they don't hurt. Sorry, if it does.
DeleteAwesome this writing is.. Kinda felt sad for the bride though because maybe it's not her fault she is in a place where her husband-to-be is settling for her making her future unbalanced.
ReplyDeleteWe never know her story right? She might know the truth anyway!
DeleteThanks dearie :)
This was amazing, Soumya. It talks so much about perspective, jealousy, love... everything in one small piece. Loved it, really!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nisha!
DeleteSimply wow. Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThis post has been selected for the Spicy Saturday Picks this week. Thank You for an amazing post! Cheers! Keep Blogging :)
ReplyDeleteThank you BlogAdda! You guys are awesome :)
DeleteWow ... and, ouch!!
ReplyDeleteThank you! Ouch it is :)
DeleteLoved it! :) The contrating perspectives are well narrated :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteBeautifully painful and achingly poignant. You are a really gifted writer, Soumya :) Good wishes for the coming year <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much darling!
DeleteWishing you the same :)
That was short n crisp and very creative!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shaivi. Love your name :)
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