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Envious Wish

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I was seeing him after years, but yet the thrill he caused within me was still the same. We had been madly in love years ago but it had all come to an end in an instant, when he proposed. Since I came from a broken family, the concept of relationships scared me. It was really hard, but we had to move on. But today when I see him with his wife, I feel a pang of jealousy and cannot help but wish that I was in her place.

This five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Envy' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.

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  1. Such a sad thing..'What Ifs' do that to you... Hence, in life we must not leave any room for regrets even if we fail or fall

    Random Thoughts Naba..#MicroblogMondays 11: Grateful Mondays

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  2. Right decision at the right time could save so much regret.

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  3. Ouch! That sure hurts. Let's hope she finds happiness later on.

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  4. The decision taken IS TAKEN. It has become part of past. What is needed now - not to crib on it and moving on with life.

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  5. Am sure every girl reading might have some person in her head, who is obviously a part of her past

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  6. nice take. Kids suffer the most when families break.

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  7. Too late does the realization always comes :(

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  8. In life we never realize the value of certain things till we see them in others' hands with envy
    Good post.

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  9. The biggest evil in this world resides inside you only and that is fear. I wish she had gone with him. But still then can't blame her.

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  10. Sometimes realizations come late... Decisions are not made...
    And... after years, when loneliness remains,, and old age happens... Such thoughts become indispensable.

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  11. It is sad .. but envy wouldn't help now :-(

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  12. Poor her... can't turn it back now...

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  13. Ah...we always want something we cannot have anymore.

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  14. Sad indeed :( Many a times we only realize it after it is too late. Nice take on the prompt!

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