With the brightest smile ever
And dressed in blue
I was already impressed
The first day I met you
Times with you felt like magic
Every time you taught me something new
I was a well learnt person myself
But I found a teacher in you
I was going through a tough time
Holding my hands you helped me sail through
You did not say much then
But your eyes said I was special to you
Days passed and so did months
Love somewhere had begun to brew
I wasn't sure where this was going
But I still wanted to be with you
When we had to give it a name
Love it was we both knew
I did not shy away from accepting it
I was glad to be a part of you
When you asked for my hand in marriage
To all my fears I bid adieu
I already knew it in my heart
I wanted to be a wife to you
It has been three years since then
Our love still feels fresh as dew
No matter what happens tomorrow
I'll forever be crazy about you
~ Soumya
Nice poem Soumya.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jo!
DeleteThis made me go awww. So cute this is. I loved the flow and the rhyme. Amazing one Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear! :)
DeleteIt is so simple and so touchy..
ReplyDeleteDirect from heart!
Simply loved it..
Thank you Geet!
DeleteAww! 'You' is very lucky to have you!
ReplyDeleteAnd vice versa! ;)
DeleteI just kept saying Awww! :)
ReplyDeleteThe rhyme scheme adds to the whole effect! :)
Thank you! :)
DeleteThis is just so cute. When I read the first four, I thought I was reading something related to me but then I knew what you were referring to. I love how madly you are in love with your hubby. I hope your love grows with every passing day. :)
ReplyDeleteIt sure will. Thank you so much :)
DeleteA very sweet depiction of love :)
ReplyDeleteThank you genius! :)
DeleteCute !
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita!
DeleteAdorable written all over!
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute poem. And every time I read a poem of yours, I learn something new in poetry writing. As in patterns of writing, following rhythms, sometimes even not following any pattern and so on. :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much for always coming back! :)
DeleteAbsolutely beautiful! ^.^
ReplyDeleteThank you darling! <3
DeleteReally 'love'ly, Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThe love shines through!
Thank you Anita! :)
DeleteThis poem actually explains more than your love for Cal :) It tells me why rhyming poetry is your perfect orgasm ! Beautiful , Soumya !
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sreeja! Its so nice to see you here :)
DeleteSuch a cute one :) Beautiful.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Reema! :)
DeleteBeautiful..:)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shesha!
DeleteCute :) Love which stays young forever is always beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear! :)
Deleteawww this is such a lovely write... how beautifully and effortlessly you have expressed your love. Loved it, totally!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rajlakshmi! :)
DeleteAwwieeee mush mush love love..
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
Deleteoh ho.... nice love story that!! cute and mushy!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Deleteso simple and so touchy..
ReplyDeleteThank you!
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