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G - Guns & Roses


I saw him walk towards me in a whimsical manner, playful and shy, holding the biggest bouquet of roses I had ever seen. He handed me the roses and knelt down with the brightest smile, as both of us had been waiting for this day. Before he could pop the question, the bullet went straight through his head, without a sound. He had betrayed my best friend, driving her to suicide. I hid the gun in the bouquet, threw it on him and walked away.

Linking to Lillie McFerrin Writes for the topic 'Whimsical'.

~ Soumya
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  1. NabanitaApril 9, 2014 at 1:02 AM

    Ohh that's intense! :D

    Random Thoughts Naba

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  2. Midnight scribblesApril 9, 2014 at 8:23 AM

    *evil grins*

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  3. UnknownApril 9, 2014 at 12:09 PM

    Good twist!

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  4. Anita SabatApril 9, 2014 at 1:56 PM

    What a story, Soumya! Great title too :)
    G for Gutsy & G for Girl! :)

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  5. Amrit SinhaApril 9, 2014 at 2:13 PM

    Wow ... what a twist .. loved it :D

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    1. SoumyaApril 9, 2014 at 2:47 PM

      This seems to echo my comment on your post! :)

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  6. the little princessApril 9, 2014 at 2:24 PM

    serves him right! i didn't see the end coming though!! loved the twist!

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  7. VinatiApril 9, 2014 at 3:03 PM

    :O
    Amazing twist!

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  8. Rupasi April 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM

    I just love your twists!!! (always)
    Reread this one so many times... My favorite!!!

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  9. NatsBKApril 9, 2014 at 4:55 PM

    woww..that was quite intense! quite an imagination.

    http://natasha-pointstoponder.blogspot.in/2014/04/h-for-hyderabad.html

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  10. phaticharApril 11, 2014 at 10:36 AM

    Whoa, cool..

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