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Come, Drive Me Crazy

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Your hair turns me on
All ruffled and in a mess
I want to touch you

I want to touch you
Feel your lips on my body
Making love all night

Making love all night
I want to lie by your side
All spent and smiling

All spent and smiling
Feeling your naked lithe frame
Let our bodies melt

Let our bodies melt
In the heat of love and lust
Come, drive me crazy

Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Drive.

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  1. DeeJJuly 14, 2014 at 6:58 PM

    Super Soumz! You play with words in a beautiful way :)

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  2. Reading PleasureJuly 14, 2014 at 8:09 PM

    Wow! sensual and romantic cascade. Real beautiful.

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  3. jazzytowerJuly 14, 2014 at 8:17 PM

    Very HOT!

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  4. AathiraJuly 14, 2014 at 10:56 PM

    Such a sensuous poem, Soum! Love it :)

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  5. UnknownJuly 14, 2014 at 11:12 PM

    WOW...hot and spicy!! Love it! ♥

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  6. The Side I HideJuly 14, 2014 at 11:51 PM

    So sensual and classy! Drove me crazy ;) :p

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  7. Ankita July 14, 2014 at 11:58 PM

    romanticccc and very passionateee! :

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  8. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 15, 2014 at 2:18 AM

    That's quite an invitation!

    Driven into Tender Flesh

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  9. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 at 4:41 AM

    Wow! Just ... wow! Love it :)

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  10. WritingsForLifeJuly 15, 2014 at 7:57 AM

    its cute and sexy all at the same time :-)

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  11. UnknownJuly 15, 2014 at 8:15 AM

    Awww, this is so romantic!

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  12. AnonymousJuly 15, 2014 at 9:42 AM

    love the linked cascade

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  13. NishaJuly 15, 2014 at 12:01 PM

    That's classy erotica - awesome! :*

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  14. NamrataJuly 15, 2014 at 1:24 PM

    So sensuous soumya..it's dripping sexy!

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  15. Mr.MiglaniJuly 15, 2014 at 1:57 PM

    Awesome flow of words !

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  16. BikramJuly 15, 2014 at 8:04 PM

    and that is once again a lovely composition ..

    Ps:- hello how can i subscribe to your posts please.

    Bikram's

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    1. SoumyaJuly 16, 2014 at 12:41 PM

      Thank you Bikram! :)

      You can subscribe via email. Option is present right below the follower list.

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  17. Anmol RawatJuly 16, 2014 at 1:43 AM

    Wow that was so sensual :p
    I could not think that the prompt can be taken up and written over like that. Awesome!

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  18. UnknownJuly 16, 2014 at 11:09 AM

    this was truly sexy! enjoyed reading it :)

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  19. AnonymousJuly 16, 2014 at 2:45 PM

    ecstatic ! poetic divine love ! 5 stars ***** Soumya !

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  20. payal agarwalJuly 16, 2014 at 7:32 PM

    classic!

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  21. KeirthanaJuly 18, 2014 at 2:33 PM

    You filled the poem with love and lust, a truly scintillating combination.

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  22. jazzytowerJuly 21, 2014 at 7:54 AM

    Mmmm! Very romantic.

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  23. Sreeja PraveenJuly 21, 2014 at 12:52 PM

    Aah.....spicily romantic,and romantically spicy :)

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