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My back is torn from the daily whips of your belt. The blood sticks to my clothes, burning me inside. I have had enough of this pain. But today, you know how it feels. I just intended on a slash from the knife, but it killed you. I now know, that blood tastes really sweet.
Oh no .. that went a bit far ..
ReplyDeletebut i guess it had to no one can bear the pain and humiliation for that long ..
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No one can. This one was well deserved.
DeleteFor what all he was doing, the blood should taste sweet for her. I love it how you have put so much in these few words. Well done, Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyo! :)
DeleteServes him right. I love all your female characters, Soumya! They are anything but stereotypes.
ReplyDeleteThank you Aathira. I feel the same about your characters too :)
DeleteDeadly sweet revenge... I hate wife-beaters.
ReplyDeleteNaari shakti zindabad!
ReplyDeleteHaha, indeed!
DeleteNicely penned. :)
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DeleteOuch.
ReplyDeleteJust what was coming, though.
And Deservedly so !
ReplyDeleteREVENGE !!! or plain justice.
ReplyDeleteEither way, well deserved.
DeleteGod! I have goosebumps!
ReplyDeleteTaste of the revenge would have been sweeter. It was a well deserved ending.
ReplyDeletewhoa! that was rocking! sometimes taking revenge becomes inevitable!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis is justice. And justice tastes sweet :)
ReplyDeleteIt sure does :)
DeleteI am a big fan of Revenge. Nicely written!
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