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Come, Drive Me Crazy

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Your hair turns me on
All ruffled and in a mess
I want to touch you

I want to touch you
Feel your lips on my body
Making love all night

Making love all night
I want to lie by your side
All spent and smiling

All spent and smiling
Feeling your naked lithe frame
Let our bodies melt

Let our bodies melt
In the heat of love and lust
Come, drive me crazy

Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Drive.

Comments

  1. Super Soumz! You play with words in a beautiful way :)

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  2. Wow! sensual and romantic cascade. Real beautiful.

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  3. Such a sensuous poem, Soum! Love it :)

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  4. WOW...hot and spicy!! Love it! ♥

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  5. So sensual and classy! Drove me crazy ;) :p

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  6. romanticccc and very passionateee! :

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  7. Wow! Just ... wow! Love it :)

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  8. its cute and sexy all at the same time :-)

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  9. love the linked cascade

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  10. That's classy erotica - awesome! :*

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  11. So sensuous soumya..it's dripping sexy!

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  12. and that is once again a lovely composition ..

    Ps:- hello how can i subscribe to your posts please.

    Bikram's

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    1. Thank you Bikram! :)

      You can subscribe via email. Option is present right below the follower list.

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  13. Wow that was so sensual :p
    I could not think that the prompt can be taken up and written over like that. Awesome!

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  14. this was truly sexy! enjoyed reading it :)

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  15. ecstatic ! poetic divine love ! 5 stars ***** Soumya !

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  16. You filled the poem with love and lust, a truly scintillating combination.

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  17. Aah.....spicily romantic,and romantically spicy :)

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