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Red Or White?

Copyright – Marie Gail Stratford

I stand in front of the wine cellar all confused as it is a big day for me and I want everything to be perfect. I still remember the day I saw her for the first time; it was love at first sight for both of us. She took some time to accept the situation, but when she did, it was the happiest day of my life. After scouring a hundred shops, I finally found the perfect ring for her. I'm going to propose tonight, and I can't make up my mind if the wine should be red or white. 

This five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Confusion' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.

This drabble (100 word fiction) is written for Friday Fictioneers, 26th September.


  1. Red! Though I'm yet to taste the white one :) Good one, Soum!

  2. Red, red.. yes red!!!

    red rose, red dress, red wine :P would be romantic!!

  3. I love how you weave a story together in five sentences!

  4. no matter what... in your excitement just remember to bring the ring!


  5. ah..the dilemma!!
    I would prefer the RED though.

  6. Funny how little things can cause dilemma! :D

    And adorable that he is taking care of every small thing! =')

  7. Replies
    1. No, you are not. You have your own choice :)

  8. I prefer white. But the occasion calls for Red. :-)


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