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They all told me that I cannot do it, but I know for sure that I can. Age sure has caught up on me, but that doesn't mean I can't walk a few steps to see The Lord. There is a church at the end of this stretch, a very powerful one they say and I want to pray for the life of my ailing wife. People offered me rides and mocked me for wanting to walk a fifty miles all by myself. But, I don't need wheels when I have immense love by my side, determination and my feet.
This five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Wheels' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
This drabble (100 word fiction) is written for Friday Fictioneers, 19th September.
Age is just a number, isn't it? I found it beautiful and profound. Great job Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteFaith and determination can get you anywhere you want. Your post reflects that so well :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Aathira :)
DeleteGood strong words !
ReplyDeleteLily
I could feel the pain in his heart.. beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Nisha! :)
DeleteThe power of love !!
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteThis is great! Nothing can stop us if we truly want something
ReplyDeleteLove can move mountains, a walk of 50 miles would be nothing :)
ReplyDeleteI agree :)
DeleteWow..faith and love can move mountains. An inspiring love story, Soumya!
ReplyDeleteThanks Uma!
DeleteAge is just a number when the heart is young enough to dream. :)
ReplyDeleteOh yeah!
DeleteDear Soumya, Interesting and very determined story. Great tale!
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Nan :)
Thank you Nan :)
DeleteSO very TRUE.. age is what we have in mind.. I do more activities now then what i did years ago ..
ReplyDeleteBikram's
I agree.
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