I blush looking at the mirror. My first thought was to remove the heavy ornaments that adorned the half of me. But I decide to wait for him to remove it instead. I blush again. I have thought about this moment like for ever. And I would do everything I could to make sure it goes perfect. I had the fresh glow and the coyness came naturally to me. I look into the mirror again and smile. The red lipstick skillfully coated on my lips would be smudged soon. As so will the vermilion on my forehead. It would be like a scene out of a daily soap, I think. The thought turns me on. I feel a thrill inside my gut and my breathing gets heavy. I laugh out loud at the anxiety I'm going through. I need to wait for him to arrive, so I save all my feelings for him. After all I had saved myself for him all these years. Just a few minutes to go and I will be completely his. In body. He had earned my soul the minute I had set my eyes on him. I walk towards the door and hear hushed noises. I know a crowd has gathered outside our room to chide us. Maybe to make some money in the bargain too. I wondered how much he would pay to come to me. Senseless ritual it was, but I suddenly wanted to know. I sit on our marital bed and am quickly transported to the fragrance around. Delicate rose petals were scattered all around the white mattress and I longed for him even more. The noise outside increased and I realized that the crowd was growing. Waiting for him to arrive. Just like me.
He remained scooped in her arms, naked. His legs dangling out of the tiny bed as he played with her hair. He swirled his fingers around her ringlet curls and watched her smile in joy. His heart blushed every time she smiled. She took him to a world beyond pleasure. A world from which he did not want to return. She teased him and surrendered to him, making him feel like a powerful victim. She owned every bit of him and he was more than glad about it. He opened his eyes with her thought and went to bed with her every night. She was the purpose of his life and she was the achievement. She had painted dreams with him and he had provided more canvas. He added in a few of his shades too. She was content being with him and he was proud of having her in his life. He wanted to show her off to the world, but she wanted to remain a secret. She was content in being the mistress of the night. She had not asked him for anything else. He had offered her a ring, but she had refused to take it. His family had finally managed to get him married elsewhere. She knew about it but it didn't matter to her. He proved that he belonged to her, in every way possible. He had stepped into her life one fine night, with a wad of cash on him. From the next night, he was a regular.
Their relationship survived on one rule. They were soul mates in the dark. In light, they belonged to some one else.
~ Soumya
Wooowwww tales of the night..! How beautifully u have written this !
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita!
DeleteThis was straight out of a movie! A man clad in silky Kurta, a woman probably chewing paan and a petite bride waiting at home. The man sure makes my blood boil.
ReplyDeleteI hope that's a compliment.
DeleteMine too, for sure.
Damn :) Painting pictures in my head, you are :)
ReplyDeleteHahaha, need more canvas? :P
DeleteI don't know what to say/comment.. Had me hooked till the last word..
ReplyDeleteVery well written.. :)
Waiting for your novel now.. :)
aah the description of the ecstasy, beautiful this one :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dearie :)
DeleteAhhhhh! Its hot but when it reaches the end its poignant. I loved the last words. Just totally love em! and of course the title.
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear! :)
DeleteSomehow I felt sad for her at the end.Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThank you KP!
DeleteI know there is more than pleasure in this..and the two different takes of the man and woman are amazing...but I loved the way you wrote about the lusting and pleasure!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Red, glad you saw that there was more than pleasure in this.
DeleteWoaaa... Amazing!! Your way of creating suspense with every little piece of romance keeps me hook to your blog.! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Preeti! I'm so glad you keep coming back here :)
DeleteWas hooked till the end. Soulmates in the dark indeed.
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You had me hooked eagerly! Awesome!
ReplyDeletePlus, I love the new header :)
Thank you! And thank you! :)
DeleteThat last line was just so apt. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you darling! I'm so glad you liked it :)
DeleteBroke my heart.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful. <3 Loved it.
Thank you darling! <3
DeleteThe dark side of the post induces sadness but it is completely distracted by the way you have written it. :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
Thank you Keirthana :)
DeleteIn the end i didn't know whether to feel sorry for the wife or the mistress ! Maybe none! Maybe for the man.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
Definitely for the man!
DeleteThanks Titli! :)
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DeleteSo, Soumya like. There is always a darker side of the story, which isn't exactly darker but the intrigue always lingers.
ReplyDeleteNice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Hahaha :D
DeleteThanks BA!
SO BEAUTIFUL....
ReplyDeleteIt is all about lust in the end...
Loved it...
Nope, not lust. Love.
DeleteThank you!
What a description! Man, this one is awesome :D
ReplyDeleteThank you ji! :)
DeleteAn amazing read! I don't know whether to be enchanted or plain angry :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Shreya! :)
DeleteOh! The poor wife. God knows why men do this. Why be fake & play with someone's trust?
ReplyDeleteWonderfully expressed, Soumya.
Its not the man to blame here, maybe his family!
DeleteThanks Anita!
What an awesome narration! I was hooked on completely till the last word! Well written!
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DeleteOh my!! I am at a loss of words to describe how much i like it its sooo well written... u knw wht saumya i cnt help it i keep coming 2 ur blog again and again u r tht good and talented tht no matter how hard i try i cant stopping come here:-D:-D
ReplyDeleteWhy do you even want to try to stop?
DeleteThanks! :)
Ah.. Your post.. Way better than mine... :D Yeah the content is same though..
ReplyDeleteYours was good too! :)
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