We shall pass through a million phases
Some might be colorful, others may be blue
No matter how tough the times are
I promise, I'll be there for you
Everything now seems to be fine
The old comforts and we welcome the new
When new beginnings may not start right
I promise, I'll be there for you
A lot of things may be thrown at us
If situations get difficult to get through
My hand will remain entwined in yours
I promise, I'll be there for you
Some people may not trust you sometimes
When fingers are pointed and suspicions brew
I shall negate all of them in a blink
I promise, I'll be there for you
If you are broke and totally clueless
If a day comes where you have nothing to do
I shall give you all I have
I promise, I'll be there for you
When your mind is baffled with piercing questions
When you have no one to speak to
I shall help you break the shackles
I promise, I'll be there for you
If our kids do not listen to what you say
Failing to see your point of view
I'll stand there nodding to your every word
I promise, I'll be there for you
If we are neglected by our own family
To it, if you want to bid adieu
I shall pack our bags together
I promise, I'll be there for you
When we grow old, things shall be difficult
It shall be tough to dye your hair or chew
I shall help you get past all with a smile
I promise, I'll be there for you
When we are all wrinkled and almost blind
Of our life, we shall remain the two people crew
Till the day I shall be laid to rest
I promise, I'll be there for you
~ Soumya
this is so beautiful :) i can feel evry line of it...
ReplyDeletewonderful poem. keep up the good work !
cheers
Thank you darling! :)
DeleteI loved the immense natural flow of words here... :)
ReplyDelete- Rahul
Thank you Rahul! Welcome to my blog :)
Deletesuch a sweet promise! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThis is so damn good.
ReplyDeleteIts so beautiful that my praise would look faded.
Its evident that its written by a person so in love :)
Wow, that's an awesome comment. Thank you Anisha :)
DeleteI'm madly in love!
"When we are all wrinkled and almost blind
ReplyDeleteOf our life, we shall remain the two people crew
Till the day I shall be laid to rest
I promise, I'll be there for you"
Ah, you saved me from all the fear of getting old. Its beautiful to grow old when you know what your love will be there for you...
I'm glad I helped you get over it :)
DeleteWow! Its a lovely poem! A true artist you are! Keep writing, Soumya! U have a new follower ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you Preeti. For your kind words and for following :)
DeleteThe love speaks in every word of it...touchwood
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteWhere are such men? I loved this verse most.
ReplyDeleteIf we are neglected by our own family
To it, if you want to bid adieu
I shall pack our bags together
I promise, I'll be there for you
Beautifully written that will warm the cockles of hearts of many women
I wrote this from a woman's point of view. Mine.
DeleteIt works both ways I guess. Thank you!
There are tears in my eyes..! Nobody can read this poem without remembering a significant other...till the last word.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita for your kind comment :)
DeleteThis is just so beautiful, Soumya. One of the best I've read on love. God bless you guys!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Nisha! Glad you liked it!
DeleteTHE CUTEST PART WAS
ReplyDelete" When we grow old, things shall be difficult
It shall be tough to dye your hair or chew
I shall help you get past all with a smile
I promise, I'll be there for you"
Made my heart ache...This is sooooooooooooooooo beautiful!
Thanks Red! You are awesome :)
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