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Useless


Beautiful face
Poisoned heart
Sheer waste

Pessimistic road
Moving ahead
Hopeless stride

Millions saved
Fatal disease
Useless penny

This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights #319. Prompt: Useless.

~ Soumya
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  1. SrinidhiJanuary 28, 2014 at 8:18 PM

    Breaks my heart. Sigh.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 28, 2014 at 8:34 PM

    nice take on the haiku.... loved it :)

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  3. BloggerWloggerJanuary 28, 2014 at 9:00 PM

    This can't be any better!! Awesome :)

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  4. NishaJanuary 28, 2014 at 11:04 PM

    Yup, such a waste.
    Loved your take.

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  5. SoumyaJanuary 28, 2014 at 11:16 PM

    Thank you Ashwini! :)

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  6. Rupasi January 28, 2014 at 11:31 PM

    Amazing haiku I have ever read...

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  7. Dhiren navaniJanuary 29, 2014 at 12:13 AM

    Awesome!!

    http://navanidhiren.blogspot.in/

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  8. UnknownJanuary 29, 2014 at 6:52 PM

    Wow. Truth has been written... :D
    Very nice..

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  9. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 29, 2014 at 7:31 PM

    Dark truths about life revealed! :)

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  10. Shabab KhanJanuary 30, 2014 at 9:24 AM

    Beautiful face
    Poisoned heart
    Joined Politics !
    *
    Pessimistic road
    Moving ahead
    Teaching Others !
    *
    Millions saved
    Fatal disease
    Donation Given !
    *
    There is nothing like useless !!
    8-)

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    1. SoumyaJanuary 30, 2014 at 11:12 AM

      There is when there a prompt called 'Useless' :P

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  11. Anita Jeyan January 30, 2014 at 11:44 AM

    Nice haiku!

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  12. avecwingsJanuary 30, 2014 at 2:09 PM

    tersely candid and beautiful

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  13. Red HandedJanuary 30, 2014 at 11:55 PM

    striking!

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  14. Amrit SinhaJanuary 31, 2014 at 1:47 PM

    Life cant be bought with money ... well said !!!

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  15. LocomenteFebruary 3, 2014 at 8:32 PM

    So lovely...Thought provoking!

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