Yell Sound, Shetland, 2014, by R.A.D. Stainforth |
Look ahead, don't look back
We have a pretty future ahead
Whenever fear crosses your mind
Just remember what I have said
These clouds cannot dampen us
Our love shall help us sail through
Ignore the dark canopy for a while
Look beyond at the skies blue
Do not be worried by this storm
The water shall not rise above us
Hold on to my hands, my love
We shall make it without a fuss
Hope is a very good thing
Just believe in what I have to say
Our life together is not over yet
Just kneel down and slowly pray
This boat shall not give up on us
We are going to start a new life
Our journey shall not be cut short
One day, you shall surely be my wife
I have no fears within me now
My love for you keeps me strong
When I have you by my side
I know that nothing can go wrong
Breathe free now, my darling
This ordeal shall be over soon
We shall get home in a while
Before the shine of the silver moon
In life, never ever give up
There shall be many more boats
Only when you are dying to live
You shall realize that hope floats
Linking to The Magpie Tales: Mag 233.
Inspiring.. It was amazing :)
ReplyDeletePoetry has always been one of your stronger areas. This was WOW!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks love! :)
DeleteLoved the ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThis has such a refreshing and liberating feel to it. Great work with the prompt. Loved this! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it, thanks! :)
DeleteClever and quite moving...
ReplyDeleteThank you Berowne.
DeleteNice Mag! Love and Light, S
ReplyDeleteThank you S!
DeleteThis one made me smile. Life is not that bad. :)
ReplyDeleteIt never is :)
DeleteYour rhymes are always so perfect ... you truly are a class apart :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrit! Your comments are always a class apart too ;)
DeleteA poem of hope & inspiration. Nice Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita! :)
DeleteThere is hope for everybody. Refreshing read.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita Hope never dies.
DeleteYou are a master at making the last two lines most awesome. Love it!
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteLovely !! The last line - simply amazing :):)
ReplyDeleteFrom title to last line this is wonderful message in a beautiful bottle it is. :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written , secret agent 3.14159 !
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSoumya very deep, soulful, optimistic and incredibly written!!! I just recited this poem to a friend of mine and now you have two compliments!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you to you both! :)
DeleteThis is so marvelously sketched. I totally agree with Amrit :) Cheers
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteInspiring and hopeful!
ReplyDeleteLoved the last stanza! Powerful and lovely! Sharing on my page!
Thank you!
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