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I took a deep breath and walked down the sandy path, slowly and completely aware of what lay ahead. I have been through so much over the past few years that I needed some time off, just for myself. I know that a heart break is not the end of the world, but I wanted time to mourn, cry, recuperate and let go. I wanted to find myself again and fall in love with her. This solo vacation would give me the much needed closure, so that I can head back with head held high and start a fresh life.
This five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Fresh' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
This drabble (100 word fiction) is written for Friday Fictioneers, 5th June 2015.
I love the idea of falling in love with yourself. And a solo vacation is such a joy. such pure joy :)
ReplyDeleteI have never had a solo vacation. Maybe someday, yes :)
Delete"I wanted to find myself again and fall in love with her"
ReplyDeleteThis should be the mantra of everyone mourning a heartbreak. Such confidence is the key to move on in life.
I completely agree. Only if you can love yourself, can you love others.
DeleteTotally resonated with me...a part of me longed for such a closure some time ago...!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you could relate.
DeleteDear Soumya,
ReplyDeleteIt's always good to take time away. In our fast paced world there isn't enough time taken to rest and regroup. Your story is a beautiful illustration of just that.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you so much Rochelle.
Deletea very sensible and mature decision. Sometimes we need these moments :)
ReplyDeleteOh yes, we do :)
DeleteIt's good to have that time with self alone..good one as always Soumya!
ReplyDeleteThank you Parul!
DeleteA closure is so very much needed to move on and a solo vacation is just what the doctor ordered!
ReplyDeleteClosure is a must to move on.
DeleteWonderfully put! We all need to let go and fall in love with the self.
ReplyDeleteThanks Uma.
DeleteNothing like a big only chain link to give you the feeling of closure! Nicely done. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Lorna.
DeleteAny trip giving oneself the Me time is always a delight!
ReplyDeleteLoved your thoughts..
Cheers
Thank you Geet!
DeleteA solo vacation sounds interesting. I have never taken one. Going to the movies by myself is also on the list. Maybe someday. :)
ReplyDeleteI haven't either! I will someday though.
DeleteA solo vacation is on my list of things to do this year! :D
ReplyDeleteLucky you!
DeleteThis is a beautifully written piece. I love the idea of a solo vacation. Sounds like a perfect opportunity to clear your head and prepare yourself for a new beginning.
ReplyDeleteThank you Mrs.
DeleteTime to take a break and understand ourselves better ... lovely tale :-)
ReplyDeleteThank Amrit!
DeleteThere's a beautiful rhythm to this. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alicia.
DeleteSo this is the blog which is amongst the best in India...why am I not surprised :)
ReplyDeleteBeen long since I commented here...years actually. But well I am back....and to what a post...about someone wanting to head back with head held high and start a fresh life.
Maybe you knew I was coming back...even if you did not I'll believe you did (yeah I am still narcissistic)
I did. And I'm glad the narcissist is back :)
DeleteFalling and being in love with yourself is a must for happiness. And trust a vacation helps to get some closure. A vacation always revitalizes you :).
ReplyDeleteAlways does.
DeleteMay she find herself and fall in love with that girl she finds again :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely delicious..the joy of falling in love:)
ReplyDeleteWith yourself :)
DeleteReminds me that my vacation is long overdue. A break from life can do wonders for the soul.
ReplyDeleteIt sure does. I need one soon too.
DeleteOh you bet!
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