The Eyes Speak


"I know you still love me."

"How can you say that?"

"I can see it in your eyes."

"What do you see?"

"Love. Pure love."

"Really?"

"Yes, I see love mixed with madness."

"You are right. Love and madness indeed."

"I knew it!"

"No, you don't."

"What do you mean?"

"It sure is love and madness. But its not for you."

~ Soumya

32 comments:

  1. Awwww...the last line gave me a shock! that was sad but lovely Soumya!

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  2. Oh My God! That was it, the end! I love your ends! :)

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  3. the last line jolted me. a bit of a surprise but then surprises are fun and it's nice that you have left it open to interpretation. Brilliant Soumya.

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  4. Woah ... the end!!! :D I like it!!!

    What a slap on the face!! ( I wish I got to say that to someone)

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  5. Its so sad. When you love someone and that person doesn't love you back. The saddest thing ever!

    P.S: I read all your posts today and I am gonna comment on them one by one. :D

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    1. Sad it sure is, but we do not know the entire story.

      Haha I woke up to a plethora of comments :)

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  6. You sure know how to twist things at the end :)

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  7. Where is my comment?!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Hmm,
    The ended was unpredictable. And the hurt on realizing how sometimes the emotions just go from "all consuming" to "null and void"

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    1. You commented before? Did not get it sweetheart!

      Totally agree.

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    1. Some people deserve such an answer!

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  9. Your posts make me imagine the characters with a good flow and at the end you just leave me with an 'Aww' :(

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