I tried to make it look like a suicide. She had heard me talk to Dev on the phone. She did not say anything at first, but later confronted me. I agreed to it and begged her not to tell it to Surjan, my husband. She agreed. But every time she needed a favour, she threatened me. A stinky maid, threatening the royal princess? I was not someone to take blackmail so easily. So when she was alone, I strangled her and pulled the fan down in her room.
I had an affair with Dev, the second prince. While my husband was away with the chief courtesan. Dev loved me whole heartedly and I did too. But no one would understand that.
I watched her being lowered to the ground. She had to die, for my love to survive. Even if it was behind closed doors. I was filled with regret and anger. For what I had done. Various emotions flooded me and I did not know how I would handle being a murderer in my mind. But a part of me, felt free.
The only solace being, the secret remained.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
~ Soumya
Love is a dual emotion. Crisp writing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ma'am.
DeleteVery nice one.But the question is for how long the secret remained.
ReplyDeleteWell, for now, it remained. Thank you KP.
DeleteWow, that's a powerful story covering a lot of emotions. I think she had full rights to have an affair but maybe not for killing. Good one Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteI agree. But she had to save the affair.
DeleteThank you Ma'am :)
Awesome! (Y)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Delete:-o that was gripping !
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteThe lengths people go to for keeping their secret a secret. Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nisha!
DeleteI read somewhere most of the murderers feel stronger after kill...I suppose this is how it works in case of terrorism...
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Yeah probably! Thanks!
Deletepar kanoon ke haath bahut lambe hote hain! :D
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Par Royal family ke haath aur zyada lambe hote hai Ramesh babu! :P
DeleteOH GOD THIS IS SUPER INTENSE!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ridx!
DeleteGood take to the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank you Red!
DeleteNice one Soumya :-) . A simple story of extra marital affair written in different and interesting way. !
ReplyDeleteThank you Heta! :)
DeleteDark! I loved it!! :)
ReplyDeleteOooh a bit dark post. All the best and lovely attempt at the prompt :)
ReplyDeletePeople can and will do anything to keep a secret hidden
ReplyDeleteAt least she murdered her and not tortured her
You have a point!
DeleteA wonderful take Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna! :)
DeleteNice Kill.
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May Almighty give some kinda shock absorber to ur husband, as i know no secret is a secret if it is with a woman.
Well, I have no idea what you are trying to say here!
Delete*shiver* Well written.
ReplyDeletecomment above seems to be a huge stereotype :P
Hahaha totally agree.
DeleteThanks love! :)
Duality is very good when it comes to portraying emotions because the human mind is so easily flickering, nice approach!
ReplyDeleteYou bet! Thank you!
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