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The Morning After


I woke up feeling complete
Curved along his sleek frame
It felt like a poetic painting
As I now shall share his name

I married the man of my dreams
My wide smile sings a happy soprano
I feel tickled by the strings of the guitar
Kissing the flute and dancing on a piano

Last night our souls entwined together
From this morning, love shall only grow
I look at his face and thank my stars
As the magical symphony caresses my toe

Written for The Magpie Tales: Mag 205.

~ Soumya
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  1. Anita Jeyan February 4, 2014 at 1:50 PM

    Beautiful !

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  2. BloggerWloggerFebruary 4, 2014 at 3:00 PM

    Wooowww!! :)

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  3. Rupasi February 4, 2014 at 7:26 PM

    Beautiful... lovely... amazing... wow... romantic
    I have seriously lost all adjectives for you ;)

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  4. Bekkie SanchezFebruary 4, 2014 at 8:51 PM

    I could hear it as you played! The lines "I feel tickled by the strings of the guitar Kissing the flute and dancing on a piano are very romantic. Nice write.

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  5. ʞɐFebruary 4, 2014 at 8:54 PM

    Beautiful. :)

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  6. VinatiFebruary 4, 2014 at 9:00 PM

    Ah..how romantic :)

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  7. UnknownFebruary 4, 2014 at 10:40 PM

    Very clever. I like how you used a lot of music references.

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  8. HardiFebruary 4, 2014 at 10:59 PM

    So lovely :)

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  9. Tess KincaidFebruary 5, 2014 at 2:29 AM

    Lovely...

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  10. Red HandedFebruary 5, 2014 at 10:04 AM

    Beautiful. The feeling of being in love and falling deeper into it!!

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  11. DeeJFebruary 5, 2014 at 12:00 PM

    You do have magic in your words! Well written!

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  12. DeeJFebruary 5, 2014 at 12:01 PM

    So romantic! Wowwwwww!

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    1. SoumyaFebruary 5, 2014 at 1:29 PM

      Thanks for coming back again! :)

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    2. DeeJFebruary 6, 2014 at 2:34 PM

      I am catching up your old posts and honest phases are just tooooo Awesome! Loved your narration and am out of words to describe how you write!

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    3. SoumyaFebruary 6, 2014 at 2:56 PM

      Thank you so much :)

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  13. Tomichan MatheikalFebruary 5, 2014 at 7:48 PM

    The morning after is a good hangover so long as it is done in good measure.
    :)

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  14. kalpana solsiFebruary 6, 2014 at 12:26 AM

    musical poetry. well tuned.

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  15. HelenaFebruary 7, 2014 at 5:26 AM

    Beautiful! Music really is everyone's first love>

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  16. SrishTiFebruary 10, 2014 at 12:32 AM

    Oh wow!
    Great symphony of words :)

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  17. Ridx February 10, 2014 at 11:59 PM

    "Last night our souls entwined together" <3

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  18. AdicrazyMarch 16, 2015 at 4:15 PM

    Can't tell you how much I loved this. Beautiful.

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