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"You are not going to find anyone like me."

"Don't challenge me."

"No one will ever love you like I do."

"I shall find someone and show you."

He did not realize that, that wasn't what I meant.

Written for Trifecta: Week 103.

~ Soumya
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  1. UnknownFebruary 25, 2014 at 3:35 PM

    very nice :) :)

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  2. AJNABIFebruary 25, 2014 at 4:07 PM

    short & nice

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  3. LocomenteFebruary 25, 2014 at 4:25 PM

    Beautiful...
    Well composed!

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  4. Sandra TylerFebruary 25, 2014 at 5:38 PM

    nicely shows how easily we can miscommunicate.

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  5. Jyotsna BhatiaFebruary 25, 2014 at 7:49 PM

    sigh! wish people understood what we mean to say.

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  6. MeghaFebruary 25, 2014 at 8:59 PM

    ohh!!! The last line kills! Well written!

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  7. Ridx February 25, 2014 at 9:51 PM

    Something like this happened with one of my friends. Miscommunication!

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  8. kalpana solsiFebruary 25, 2014 at 11:29 PM

    The picture and the poem complement each other. The communication gap wins here. Wish both understood each other.

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  9. The EnchantressFebruary 26, 2014 at 12:06 AM

    men are eewwwwwwwww

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  10. Aditi RayFebruary 26, 2014 at 12:14 AM

    wow... :)
    i so envy ur writing style.... <3

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  11. Ashley KagaoanFebruary 26, 2014 at 3:49 AM

    Well done.

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  12. MiFebruary 26, 2014 at 9:36 AM

    that wasn't what she meant! ? Wow... this should be turned into a bigger story..

    i love all these bits you write! :)

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  13. SrinidhiFebruary 26, 2014 at 11:25 AM

    Sigh.

    Beautiful :)

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  14. NishaFebruary 26, 2014 at 5:16 PM

    Heartbreaking..

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  15. kymmFebruary 27, 2014 at 1:08 AM

    Nicely put. So much misunderstanding...

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  16. troy P.February 27, 2014 at 9:56 AM

    This was simply heartbreakingly beautiful, and yes, "sigh."

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    1. SoumyaFebruary 27, 2014 at 12:39 PM

      Sigh seems to be the theme here :)

      Thanks Troy! :)

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  17. Sini RachelFebruary 27, 2014 at 3:49 PM

    Barney Stintson...!!! fromm whatever days I have seen...a person who clicks with you is rare and once you find them don't ever let go...

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  18. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2014 at 5:46 AM

    Great last line!

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  19. TrifectaFebruary 28, 2014 at 6:19 AM

    Great job showing the importance of communication. I enjoyed the picture, too. Thanks for linking up.

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  20. Farhan JalilFebruary 28, 2014 at 1:43 PM

    Concise yet deep ! precisely the type of post i'd like to read.

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  21. KeirthanaFebruary 28, 2014 at 9:56 PM

    The misunderstanding is portrayed very well with such limited words :)

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  22. P.S. JoshiMarch 1, 2014 at 1:30 PM

    Well-written piece. A misunderstanding like that needs to be cleared up as soon as possible. Pride shouldn't stand in the way.

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