Open Up

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Why just nod your head
If you have an opinion
Share it with others

Share it with others
Your wonderful ideas
Don't fear anyone

Don't fear anyone
Everyone is still learning
Give it a good shot

Give it a good shot
Open up to the world around
It is not so bad

It is not so bad
Try to embrace everything
Make your mark out there

Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Open.

44 comments:

  1. a cascade of beautiful opens ! wow !
    (in fact i was waiting for your post and suddenly it pops up )

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    1. That's sweet of you! Thank you :)

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    2. hope you like my ''open '' too !

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    3. I did. It was very thought provoking :)

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  2. Never fear anyone but yourself.. ;) Lovely Soumya.. :)

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  3. thats lovely! having a fearless mind is the first step towards achieving something in life!

    nice :)

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  4. I could almost feel this one with all my heart! Beautiful :)

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  5. I like this scheme used by you i.e. repeating the third line in the first of the next stanza. I believe I have mentioned it previously as well :p
    Anyways nice one.
    "Don't fear anyone
    Everyone is still learning"
    Best lines for me :)

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    1. Haha you had :P

      Thank you so much Anmol!

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  6. Voicing out what you truly feel can be very liberating and like all worthy things needs a lot of courage.

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  7. Sometimes, I'd rather listen and soak up what others have to say :-)

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  8. Aah lovely write up. Been having the same thoughts lately. Been silent for too long :)

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  9. Soumz...this is like you have written it to me :)

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  10. Good one Soumya ! You are the master of Haiku now!

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  11. wah...liked how you played with words here..I echo your thoughts.

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  12. wonderful haiku set! loved the smooth flow of though from one haiku to another :)

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  13. "Don't fear anyone

    Everyone is still learning

    Give it a good shot

    beautiful lines...:) Convey the meaning so strongly.. really loved it..:)

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    1. Thank you Monica. Nice to have you back here :)

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  14. A lovely cascading haiku imploring one to open up and share with the world.

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  15. First time at your space. Life of this Leo definitely needs a Open reading!
    Like the rhythm of your poem.

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    1. Thank you so much and a warm welcome to you! :)

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  16. Good one. This would open up so many hearts.

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  17. A very nice cascading haiku.. with a message...
    Motivating!

    Well done :)

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  18. That's quite an 'open' chain of thoughts there, Soumya. I'm not tired of telling you that I love your Haiku Loop :)

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  19. "Everyone is learning". Beautiful.

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