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Why just nod your head
If you have an opinion
Share it with others

Share it with others
Your wonderful ideas
Don't fear anyone

Don't fear anyone
Everyone is still learning
Give it a good shot

Give it a good shot
Open up to the world around
It is not so bad

It is not so bad
Try to embrace everything
Make your mark out there

Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Open.

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  1. Milan RajkumarJune 19, 2014 at 10:38 PM

    a cascade of beautiful opens ! wow !
    (in fact i was waiting for your post and suddenly it pops up )

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    1. SoumyaJune 21, 2014 at 10:41 PM

      That's sweet of you! Thank you :)

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    2. AnonymousJune 22, 2014 at 2:11 AM

      hope you like my ''open '' too !

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    3. SoumyaJune 22, 2014 at 3:29 PM

      I did. It was very thought provoking :)

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  2. Donna BurmanJune 19, 2014 at 10:55 PM

    Never fear anyone but yourself.. ;) Lovely Soumya.. :)

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  3. Ankita June 19, 2014 at 11:21 PM

    thats lovely! having a fearless mind is the first step towards achieving something in life!

    nice :)

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  4. Soumyaa VermaJune 19, 2014 at 11:24 PM

    I could almost feel this one with all my heart! Beautiful :)

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  5. Anmol RawatJune 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM

    I like this scheme used by you i.e. repeating the third line in the first of the next stanza. I believe I have mentioned it previously as well :p
    Anyways nice one.
    "Don't fear anyone
    Everyone is still learning"
    Best lines for me :)

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  6. ReshmaJune 20, 2014 at 3:33 AM

    Voicing out what you truly feel can be very liberating and like all worthy things needs a lot of courage.

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  7. PurbaJune 20, 2014 at 4:35 AM

    Sometimes, I'd rather listen and soak up what others have to say :-)

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  8. Midnight scribblesJune 20, 2014 at 10:59 AM

    Aah lovely write up. Been having the same thoughts lately. Been silent for too long :)

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  9. DeeJJune 20, 2014 at 11:48 AM

    Soumz...this is like you have written it to me :)

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  10. AathiraJune 20, 2014 at 1:39 PM

    Good one Soumya ! You are the master of Haiku now!

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  11. Red HandedJune 20, 2014 at 4:38 PM

    wah...liked how you played with words here..I echo your thoughts.

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  12. mysundrynotesJune 20, 2014 at 5:51 PM

    an inspiring one :) !

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  13. Jyotsna BhatiaJune 20, 2014 at 7:13 PM

    Lovely !!

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  14. UnknownJune 20, 2014 at 8:47 PM

    wonderful haiku set! loved the smooth flow of though from one haiku to another :)

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  15. monicaJune 21, 2014 at 8:42 PM

    "Don't fear anyone

    Everyone is still learning

    Give it a good shot

    beautiful lines...:) Convey the meaning so strongly.. really loved it..:)

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    1. SoumyaJune 21, 2014 at 10:49 PM

      Thank you Monica. Nice to have you back here :)

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  16. kalpana solsiJune 22, 2014 at 8:07 PM

    A lovely cascading haiku imploring one to open up and share with the world.

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  17. Live2cherishJune 22, 2014 at 10:54 PM

    First time at your space. Life of this Leo definitely needs a Open reading!
    Like the rhythm of your poem.

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    1. SoumyaJune 23, 2014 at 3:01 PM

      Thank you so much and a warm welcome to you! :)

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  18. KeirthanaJune 23, 2014 at 11:59 AM

    Good one. This would open up so many hearts.

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  19. LocomenteJune 23, 2014 at 2:49 PM

    A very nice cascading haiku.. with a message...
    Motivating!

    Well done :)

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  20. Sreeja PraveenJune 24, 2014 at 5:40 PM

    That's quite an 'open' chain of thoughts there, Soumya. I'm not tired of telling you that I love your Haiku Loop :)

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  21. MominaJune 25, 2014 at 12:33 AM

    "Everyone is learning". Beautiful.

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