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Your eyes are inviting me
Oh girl, what is that you want
That golden tan on your body
Is perfect for this taunt
Your pink lips mesmerize me
As you sip on to your drink
What is that on your mind
It makes me want to think
Your hair is far from messed
In the pleasant summer breeze
Who are you, dear stranger
Watching you gives me peace
I can't take my eyes off you
You cool me in this blistering heat
As the waves make their sound
The sand slips through my feet
Is that me you are smiling at
Oh God, should I make a move
There you go dancing again
My jaw drops watching you groove
I now slowly walk up to you
The music plays with my mood
The beats do not distract me
To you, my eyes are glued
You welcome me with a tease
I crave to be a part of you
Your touch sends me a chill
Even as a hot wind blew
I can now feel you reciprocate
For me, it was love at first glance
I want this day to never end
The beginning of our beach romance
Linking to Theme Thursday: Prompt - Beaches.
that was really cool! i could feel the romance and feelings in the poem!
ReplyDeleteNice one :D
Thanks Ankita! :)
Deleteromantic poetry soumz!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI find beaches very romantic! Love this one:)
ReplyDeleteMe too! Thanks Pooja! :)
Deletereally nice & refreshing poem !! ;)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteBeautiful! I can see him walking up to her and taking her in his arms :)
ReplyDeleteThat was the idea, thanks :)
DeleteI can totally imagine it happening with me! And wow what a feeling :-P
ReplyDeleteYou make me want to be that woman on the beach :P
ReplyDeleteThis was lovely.
You can be. Get to Fort Kochi with Mr. Funk now! :P
DeleteThanks!
I agree with Red!! It's insanely romantic!! (sigh..)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anu! :)
DeleteSomeone says this is cool , but shall I say, this is HOT :) Hot romance :) Ultraromantic :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Sreeja, you are very kind! :)
DeleteAha, lustful and beautifully portrayed. Beaches are the ultimate romance spot and you did them justice!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Deletebeautiful :) jst made me remind beach and pleasant environment near beach ^_^ lovely poem :)
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Thank you!
DeleteYou just need to add a chorus and I feel this can be converted into a romantic pop number :D
ReplyDeleteHahaha, I shall try doing that now! :)
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