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Like intoxicating wine you fill me up
Flowing through every drop of my blood
Nurturing every feeling inside me
Love grew into a flower from a bud
I can feel you in every vein
Your touch always gives me a high
I grow wings in your presence
Flying high above in the sky
You are like the sweet shot of tequila
Quenching the thirst of my parched throat
Drenched in spirit I float with you
Finding our way to our love boat
Every ring of smoke that we share
Screams out our passionate tale
No matter how many sticks we burn
My feelings will never get stale
I am addicted to you in every way
Without you I cannot think right
You are the venom I crave for
In my bed, every night
The whiskey we share knows us well
It too has become a part of our story
I have surrendered myself to you
You now own me in all glory
In spite of all these varied options
Nothing comforts me like your hug
A drink is just an excuse to be by your side
Your love is my actual drug
Written for The Magpie Tales: Mag 222.
The lengths we go to be with our loved one...the comfort in the embrace of our loved one feels like home. Lovely poem Soumya.
ReplyDeleteLove makes you that way. Thanks Janu!
DeleteWOW! This is intoxicating. Wonders how you created a perfect imaginary and rhyme. Simply stunning! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru! :)
DeleteWhoa....!!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat write!!!!
Thank you!
DeleteHi,
ReplyDeleteI am a frequent visitor to your blog. Seeing how prolific you are, I was wondering if you make money from the blog (if not, you should)?
Also, I am thinking of starting my own blog. Any tips for an aspirinh blogger ?
Hello, welcome here.
DeleteI do not make money from my blog, because I do not want to. This space is for myself and I do not want revenue out of it.
Start your blog and write for yourself first and then for others. That's the only tip I'd give you now.
I loovvveed the last four lines sooo much !!! Awesome !
ReplyDeleteThank you soooo much! :)
DeleteMe too,, The last four lines are simply amazing!!
DeleteThank you so much ladies! :)
DeleteLove is a drug indeed! Lovely, Soumya :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Anita! :)
DeleteLeonard Cohen could/would sing this ..... smiles!!
ReplyDeleteThat's so sweet of you! Thanks :)
DeleteLovely Soumya! I just love the way you write poems. Simple yet awesome!
ReplyDeleteThank you Reema!
Deletethat was lovely
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ReplyDeleteLove you too! :)
DeleteOMG !! This is soooo lovely :) I'm reminded of your comment on mine..... great minds do think alike , don't they ? :P :P :P
ReplyDeleteOh yes they do! :D
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