Taste Of Blood

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My back is torn from the daily whips of your belt. The blood sticks to my clothes, burning me inside. I have had enough of this pain. But today, you know how it feels. I just intended on a slash from the knife, but it killed you. I now know, that blood tastes really sweet.

29 comments:

  1. Oh no .. that went a bit far ..
    but i guess it had to no one can bear the pain and humiliation for that long ..

    Bikram's

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    1. No one can. This one was well deserved.

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  2. For what all he was doing, the blood should taste sweet for her. I love it how you have put so much in these few words. Well done, Soumya :)

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  3. Serves him right. I love all your female characters, Soumya! They are anything but stereotypes.

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    1. Thank you Aathira. I feel the same about your characters too :)

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  4. Deadly sweet revenge... I hate wife-beaters.

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  5. Nicely penned. :)

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  6. Ouch.

    Just what was coming, though.

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  7. Taste of the revenge would have been sweeter. It was a well deserved ending.

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  8. whoa! that was rocking! sometimes taking revenge becomes inevitable!

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  9. This is justice. And justice tastes sweet :)

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  10. I am a big fan of Revenge. Nicely written!

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