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H: Hunt

© Jennifer Pendergast

I might not know where you are, but I remember your face very clearly and it is etched in my mind and soul forever. The man who took away everything that I had, everything that mattered to me. The wretched demon who snatched away the love of my life and my only reason for living, but now I have another reason to survive. I will find you, put you through the same pain and then kill you. I know it is a long journey and it begins from this very coach; find a place to hide, the hunt is on.

This five sentence fiction is written for the topic 'Hunt' at Lillie McFerrin Writes.

This drabble (100 word fiction) is written for Friday Fictioneers, 10th April 2015.

Linking to the A to Z Challenge.


  1. Whoa! Reads like the beginning of a thriller!

  2. Can feel her pain of losing a loved one. Can empathize with her feelings too. But dont know if the hunt to kill will give her that peace!

    1. If it were me, it will. I would have done justice to a loved ones soul.

  3. That's a powerful 100 words...whoever wronged her better beware!

  4. I'm glad I'm not the hunted here.

  5. Amazing and etched with so much power:)

  6. nice one Soumya :-)

  7. So good! Thought you would like to know there is an extra "r": I will find you, put your through... :)

  8. Ooh, a twisted tale this one, I suspect.


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