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Growing Wings To Fly

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Broken yet alive
In this heartless world I am
Growing wings to fly

Growing wings to fly
Slowly I shall learn to soar
High above the sky

High above the sky
I shall watch the world beneath
Fighting to survive

Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Fly.

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  1. You are one talented woman!! Tried my hand at haiku once. Was terrible. :D And yes I wish I could sprout wings and fly as well..

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    1. Thank you Anu! It is a bit hard I agree, but once you get the hang of it, it gets easier!

      Go ahead and fly! At times you do not need wings for it! :)

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  2. Fly high..so high till you reach the moon. :)

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  3. Even the sky is not safe . the giant bird too had to fight to survive. very nicely put.

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  4. How wonderful to grow wings and fly...what freedom that would offer! ♥

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  5. That was an inspiring poem!
    What is this format known as?

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    1. Thank you KP! This format is called Haiku. With the first line having 5 syllables, the second line 7 and the third like 5 syllables. A collection of them is called a Haiga. The one above is a collection of Haikus.

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  6. and the fight shall let you free :)

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  7. Very inspiring Haiku. In spite of broken wings how sweetly the birdie hopes to fly higher and higher.

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  8. AMEN to that .. may you fly high and happy ..
    lovely little poem

    Bikram

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  9. Loved the spirited attitude in this Haiku cascade Sowmya.

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  10. o so beautiful and inspiring ! reminds of that book '' jonathan livingstone seagull ''

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    1. Thank you Milan. I haven't read that book. Will do so now!

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    2. yes ,its a good one written by Richard Bach . by the way ,pl have a look at my ''fly ''

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  11. beautiful haiku....nicely done :)

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  12. The sense of freedom that your words have brought in this post is very scintillating. I could almost feel the urge to fly away, without a care.

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  13. And that lures me to soar high :) Beautiful words.

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