Boring talk
Love is lost some where
We both drift
We both drift
Far from each other
With eyes closed
With eyes closed
We choose to ignore
Our problems
Our problems
Not larger than "us"
Yet we drift
Written for Haiku Horizons: Prompt - Drift.
That was touching. There are some distances that can't be bridged :( And what a lovely take on Haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
DeleteBeautiful play of words and a superb imagination!
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru! :)
DeleteOne of the pillars of a strong marriage - talk about your problems.
ReplyDeleteI get your drift :) hehe I like the wordplay here!
ReplyDeleteHahaha thanks! :)
DeleteThat was brilliant.. 'yet we drift'
ReplyDeleteThank you Vinati! :)
DeleteThe last Haiku is simply brilliant Soumya, marriage is all about bridging you and me with us indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma!
DeleteIf only they spoke it out...
ReplyDeleteThis was lovely!
If only...
DeleteThank you Red!
Loved it.
ReplyDeleteLovely pattern and the plot took it off beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear! :)
DeleteWith eyes close, we choose to ignore our problems...some times we do it with our eyes open too. Lovely set of Haiku.
ReplyDeleteI completely agree! Thank you Janu!
DeleteLovely set Soumya !!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jyo!
DeleteHmm... This has got me thinking...
ReplyDeleteIts true though! No fights or problems or whatever there is, is bigger than the person / couple themselves and can be solved... holds true for every relation actually...
Absolutely! Nothing is bigger than the couple themselves.
Deleteplain truth woven with sublime words ! awesome Soumya !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Milan.
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteShort and Crisp.
Loved how you repeated the last line in every start of the next stanza :)
Loved the pattern of words! :)
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